Painted Kiss (poem) by Dale Clark on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

OOOOOH CJ How I looooove a gooood WET kiss like this.....and loooong! This was an open mouth kiss in the best of fashion!

Teresa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 14, 2003

CJ, what an awesome sensual write. Imagery that is a delight to read.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Very romantic write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

CJ
You have out done yourself, excellent.

Nancy

Reviewed by Marlene Dawn

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Oh my gosh....whew....sounds lovely.

*Marlene*

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

You have some excellent lines in this write, CJ...extrememly well done and sensual to a "T".
Amor

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Oh so sweet!!!!! Great write indeed!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Nice........

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Wow! Great creativity here! Bravo, I loved it!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Painted Kiss.. How unique... Love the thoughts and colors of this write.. Just stunning

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Woohoo! This makes me want to go roll around in some paint :-)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

CJ,
You kiss so beautifuly in verses ;)
"Our kiss, our love
we paint feverishly
in amorous sensuality
colors of sexual collisions
sketching intersected forms
our orgasmic creation"
Peggy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

What a KISS! alliteration, all the colors of the rainbow, with your magnificent words, a real feast!Thank you!;-)

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

A visual treat! A stunning poem, Dale.
Chrissie

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

This is WONDERFUL!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

This Was so excellent! absolutely breath-takingly beautiful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Hi CJ...
So beautiful and romantic..

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Whoa Dale!
This is so gorgeous! What a painting!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Absolutely breathtaking !!

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

You are quite the artist good sir! Absolutely breathtaking painting this was!

--Karissa