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Pay To Pray
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This was a little disappointment that happened when I was in California recentlty.

Pay to Pray

I went to a church today.
I couldn’t get inside to pray
because they wanted me to pay.
Only in Californ-ia.
It was an old mission in Santa Barbara,
where I didn’t get the opportunity
to have any spiritual visions.
Why didn’t the saints make it possible for me to
go in and pray without having to pay?
I didn’t want a tour,
just to go into the chapel and say a prayer,
to help me be more pure.
It didn’t make sense to me that they sold
me religious items from their gift shop,
but that is where my spiritual adventure had to stop.
Guess I should go back to Ohio
where visiting a church and praying are free.
Yep, I guess that is where I am supposed to be.



Copyright ã by Judith Pleasant 5,2/2004

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Reviewed on June 12, 2004
A gem of a write - poetic mastery!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
I think it is a SIN to have to
PAY to Pray! It is Outrageous!
You should be able to walk into
a chapel or mission ANYDAY of the
week and say a prayer to God! The very
idea! No wonder we have thunderstorms!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
Judith a very inditing poem; for how can they create these roadblocks to love and life. But each of us pays to pray.
We pay with our hearts, or else we pay nothing and receive nothing. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
Nice write. I can't recall if I've ever been to that particular mission or not, but it is more than likely a part of the state parks system and no longer under the authority of the Catholic church. That said, it seems that religion will always find a way to make a person pay. One way or another.


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