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Hidden
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Exploring my constant quest for love and acceptance

Taste my tears, drink my pain,
Ingest my essence, let it wash over you like rain.
Look through my eyes, seek to understand,
Give your approval, grasp my hand.
Absorb me, soak me in,
Savor me, let us mingle and blend.
Give me the oneness that I crave,
Make me the treasure that you claim and save.
Lay me down, immerse yourself in my flow,
Hold me close and never let go.
Am I worthy of an ardent quest?
Will I be your sweet haven, be cursed or blessed.
Possess me, make me your treasure,
Make me precious, beyond value or measure.
I am a nomad, without a home,
Always unwelcomed, so I continue to roam.
Never belonging, has been a thorn in my side,
Being a clown for acceptance, while the real me hides.
For no one cared to enter my abyss,
To find what was hidden within the mist.
Do you really want to embark upon my uncharted sea?
To brave the darkness and discover the hidden me?
 

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 Reviews of "Hidden"
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2007
Does anyone ever really know the real us?
They say love is over rated...
Is love really in me when I was taught to hate
from one parent and to love from the other parent?
Hugs and stuff..
Excellent write Comfort Zone....

Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
'Braving the darkness to discover the hidden me' You know I love this. Our shared whispers and longing to be found! ((LOve ya Bunches)) ~yourDreamyGal

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Steppin inside yourself to write this one! Very touching and sincere. Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
You really create a beautiful mystery here: one of unclaimed love.Great poem

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Truly stunningly expressed from the soul, a nomad you say?..
You are a born poetess!...yourgenius
touches my heart, as i love to lose myself
in your prose SC,as your heart stands alone in its exquisiteness
mike


Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Lovely write, Southern Comfort; excellently penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on May 12, 2007
Southern Comfort,

This is beautifully penned; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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