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The Wrong Number
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Don had given up on love, but a wrong number stirred his emotions.

After three failed tries, Don had given up on love,
Each break-up had truly been a blessing, he thanked the stars above!
He was burning the midnight oil, immersed in his work,
When the phone's insistant ringing brought him back with a jerk!
Don answered the phone, highly upset,
He would render a tongue lashing the caller wouldn't soon forget.
" John, please don't hang-up, I need to talk!"
" My life has been so empty since you decided to walk!"
" Why did you go? What did I do wrong?"
" You know that I love you, I have all along!"
Don was about to say that she had the wrong number,
But her pleading voice tugged at his heart, making his mood somber.
This poor girl had encountered a jerk,
Who loves them and leaves them, that's how they work.
Having been dumped, Don felt her pain,
The whys haunt you and drive you insane.
She stopped talking and softly sighed,
She had taken Don's emotions on a wild ride.
He said," I am John's roommate, he's not here",
" But I will give him your message, My Dear".
" Please don't hang-up, you need to be heard",
" I have felt your pain and will listen to your every word!"
Don spent the rest of the night calming her fears,
They chatted like old friends, sharing laughter and tears.
They exchanged numbers and each made a new friend,
Maybe a romance will blossom and a new love will begin.



 

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 Reviews of "The Wrong Number"
Reviewed on July 7, 2007
Crafty - Crafty - Crafty Women!
Love this think - up, and it really happens!
WArmly,WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
Stay SAFE!
Stay POsitive!
BE HAPPY!
:)

Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Such sweet thoughts. Lovely poem SC.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
An engaging poetic tale, SC. Thanks for sharing it. Love and hugs,

Regis (Professor Dreamy)

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Awww, this one is touching and tender, PA. Loved it. Lydi**

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
riiiiiiiinnnnnnnngggggggg...would somebody answer that thing
Oh darlin, I ain't forgotten... lol OK OK Sorry I ain't funny
It's an enchanted evening for sure, just cause of you...I told
ya when I met you...you're so fine...I'll be back to get ya

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Some enchanted evening.....
Sweet one, hunny pie

Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Quite a story and one that I have seen happen in similiar circumstances before...

Fee

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Sometimes coincidents can blossom into something worthwhile. Great.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on July 6, 2007
Phone calls can be a new avenue-Opening textures & {you know what I mean} <>Ted


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