When I found him, he was sad and wounded, so I took him home and loved him
I found him quite by chance, he sat mournfully by his dead mate,
He was a beautiful white dove, who was lamenting his fate.
I tenderly picked him up and held him to my heart,
He gazed at me with understanding eyes and trusted me from the start.
I buried his mate and we both cried,
We were sorrowful that she was no longer at his side.
I took him home and loved him tenderly,
Knowing all the while, that someday he would leave me.
He was so gentle and sweet, he taught me how to care,
I treasured each day that he was there.
As I loved and nurtured him, he grew stronger everyday,
He became restless and yearned to fly away.
Then one day he heard the coo of another dove,
I kissed him and whispered," Go Beautiful One, go find a new love!"
I took him outside on my finger, he saw her on the branch of a tree,
Without a backward glance, he flew away from me.
Soon they were billing and cooing, he had found a new mate,
I watched them fly away,through tears of joy, overjoyed ar his new fate.
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Reviews of "Ode To A Dove"
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
A very sensitive poem, beautiful. Victor
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
G00d one SC. Just wondermuse
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Hugs........................
This is beutiful and heartbreaking at the same time SC, reminds me of the Willie Nelson Song..."Angel Flying Too Close To The Ground" if you have never heard it before try and find a copy, you will love it.
From all your work this one emerges as one of the best if not the best yet to be produced.
It not only touches the heart of the reader but also the soul of any other poet.
Brilliant and excellent, my hat is off.
Georg
SC I love your opening line,and of course the rest just flows from there.Your divirisity is amazing SC,the dove should be so lucky to have fate bring him to your door.Nice write ,
stan nassano
SC,
That is very,very rare indeed. For a dove to get over a fallen mate.
I have seen many a dove "go to ground" death to await
by your sweet love he must have felt coerceded.
To go and find another mate.
Bless you sweet one.
Walt
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Though he has flown away,
in his heart, you'll always stay.
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Have a great day...
Hugs........................
Fee
It not only touches the heart of the reader but also the soul of any other poet.
Brilliant and excellent, my hat is off.
Georg
stan nassano
That is very,very rare indeed. For a dove to get over a fallen mate.
I have seen many a dove "go to ground" death to await
by your sweet love he must have felt coerceded.
To go and find another mate.
Bless you sweet one.
Walt
in his heart, you'll always stay.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
love is all encompassing. It is wonderful
and so healing. Excellent, girl ;)