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Captive Bride
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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This is a Cherokee Love Story! Part 1 of 4 Parts

Doe-eyes was of marrying age,
She was being courted by many a handsome brave.
Her father, Lone Elk, was very vexed,
As she turned up her nose at each one and said,"Next!"
Lone Wolf watched all of this with amused eyes,
He knew that Doe-eyes was his woman, he had seen it written in the night skies.
He made no move to join in,
He'd let her make fools of the other men.
He had watched her bathe at the waterfall daily, quite alone,
He had seen her nude splendor and it had made his manhood moan.
He watched her splash and play like a child,
She was unaware of his watching, she thought that there was no one around for miles.
After her bath, she preened nude on a big rock,
Her lovely, full breasts called to him, putting his body into shock.
His dark eyes caressed her body, it took his breath,
He smiled knowingly, Doe-eyes could grant him much happiness.
His fevered body ached to hold her near,
She would be his woman, he had no fear.
He had many fine horses to give Lone Elk, so she could be his bride,
Soon Doe-eyes would dwell at his side.
Her antics to escape marriage, made chuckles rumble through his chest,
She stuck her tongue out at each suitor, with great spirit she was blest.
Tomorrow at her bathtime, he would steal her away,
He smiled at Father Sun, for tomorrow would be a very good day!

Music: Apache


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 Reviews of "Captive Bride"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 25, 2007
Lone WolF...oh his name fits his motion..sleazy bugger...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 24, 2007
Lone Wolf has plans for Doe-eyes
and you know what to do about it
eh SC? ;)

Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
Hmm.. I'm thinking He'd better watch out for Her! lol. Bet she won't go quietly :)

((LOve ya)) ~SilentDream

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
Oh she's in for it LOL, he gonna get her!
Watch out Doe eyes.
Cool write SC.
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 23, 2007
A great write SC, I do so look forward to your poetry, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Great writing SC...waiting to read more about the Apaches...Hugs and Love, Peggy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Such a wonderful, lovely tale. Could see her sitting on the rock and hear the water rushing by.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Gotta watch those lone wolves, they'll getcha every time. The music is perfect for the write. SC you do these things so well, hon, you make me laugh, for I don't think Lone Wolf is going to be as happy as he thinks.

Wonderful write and I too agree with La Belle.

Ann

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
I agree with La Belle..
Hugs....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Thank you for sharing this tale of love, SC. Love and best wishes,

Regis (Reg)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Great beginning to this mini series...look forward to next installment...

Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Cherokee brave should hurry, a Sioux from the Northen Stars are coming with hundred buffalo skins as a dowry to see Lone Elk, what will Lone Wolf do?
Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 22, 2007
I have a special place in my heart for Native American romance /historical novels..Write it SC, this is a very awesome beginning...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on August 22, 2007
Waiting for part two, I think you should make this into a romance novel SC.


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