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Love's Elusive Butterfly
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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The Lark sang sweetly of love, from the branch of a tree,
He entreated singing," Come follow me, follow me",
Misty aqua eyes beheld his beauty and eager ears strained to hear his song,
I wanted to believe in love, so I gladly followed along.
He led me down primrose lined lanes,
Luring me onward with his melodious refrains.
I was enchanted by his love spell,
I wanted true love, more than tongue can tell.
He was leading me far away from my home,
I was in pursuit of finding a love to call my own.
He led me to a meadow, where beautiful wildflowers grew,
He showed me the elusive butterfly of love, to pursue.
The butterfly fluttered around me and I held out my hand,
But sadly, the elusive butterfly never would land.

MUSIC: Elusive Butterfly
 

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 Reviews of "Love's Elusive Butterfly"
Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Tranquil and sweet. Makes me think of warm spring days in the meadow, lying in a field of sunflowers, smiling as butterflies lit on my nose! Joyful!

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Wonderful writing ... as always.

Sandy

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Sc
this A beautiful and enchanting write
Great imagery thanks for sharing this lovely jewel
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Twisted Words (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
I can see it all. I really like this one, with some very good lines.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
A woman like you should be loved fully, deeply, perfectly. A touching poem.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Being under such a spell and to see the beauty that lies within. Your butterfly represents a free spirit and a free spirit it shall remain. Lovely images presented in this...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
SC,
you offer us a delicate romantic moment on the surface and beneath the all too human feelings of longing and frustration. This is beautifully rendered.
John

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Georg is hilarious!
Southern, you will find that love and this writing is of love. Patience my friend.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Your romantic heart sang a beautiful melody of sweet longing for love in this lovely write SC. Well done.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
It will, Comfort. Just you wait. Lovely write. -gene.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Ah, very nice! Thanks!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Wonderful write with a great message!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Whack it with a folded newspaper and it will stay forever!

Georg

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
Do you SING SC? PLEASE sing these beautiful words to all of us. Fantastic, I love butterflies and now even more. Love ya, Bonnie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 12, 2008
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOLDEN WORDS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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