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Shadow Woman's Sorrow
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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Shadow Woman had always been like a wisp of smoke, there and then gone,
She was born into the Cherokee Tribe, but was just there and didn't truly belong.
She knew things that would scare and truly amaze,
Others of the tribe would avoid her trance like gaze.
When she spoke of future happings, others new it was real,
It was said she had a seeing eye and to her the future was revealed.
This made Shadow Woman feared and always quite alone,
She would lament her sorrow to the moon, as a she wolf, howls and moans.
Shadow Woman secretly adores Lone Wolf, but no expression dons her face,
He is a great warrior and feels, in his life, Shadow Woman would have no place.
He walks among the tribe, a respected man among men,
He feels Shadow Woman's love, but he will not let her or it in.
She went to him secretly, offering her love, but he pushed her away,
His cruelty wounded her deeply and she begin to die inside that day.
Once again, Shadow Woman had tried to reach out, only to find no one there,
Now unable to trust, she will reach out no more, her heart a stone, without care.
She realizes that she is doomed to be alone,
She must become a wandering nomad, without the hope of love or a home.
She walks in shadows, embracing the darkness of night,
Dreaming her sad little dreams, while dancing in the moonlight.
Shadow Woman, once hopelessly romantic, her eyes reflect love that was not returned,
She wears the mask of bravery and strength, to hide a broken heart that yearns.
After staying a short time, she mounts her horse and gallops away,
She heads towards the setting sun, always finding nothing and no place she can stay.

MUSIC: NATIVE SPIRIT

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 Reviews of "Shadow Woman's Sorrow"
Reviewed by F Macy
Reviewed on November 14, 2008
Part of my heritage is of the Cherokee nation. I am not sure of the tribe. I started a poem called "Walking in the Shadows." Your Shadow Woman gives us one reason why many women walk in Shadows. Your writng is insightful and revealing.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
Shadow Woman should change name to Happy Butterfly, because Lone dog (never Wolf) got is dark heart pierced by Sioux arrow.

Hugh!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
I liked this change from your usual SC and you tell a powerful story here. Should do more in this genre.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
SC,
you handle the familiar theme of unrequited love with your own unique style; compelling reading.
John

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Such a beautiful writing. I think if someone does not love you back...they were not worth the effort.
CarolHawks

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
A good tale, Ms Comfort, though a bit sad. Somehow,
you missed the funny part. But I'm sure you'll make up
for it. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Oh how utterly sad and leaves one broken hearted as to her fate, very interesting tale....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
S.C, this is outstanding. It's so realistically whoaful and sad. You make that feeling just jump right out there! REALLY ENJOYED!!

Reviewed on October 13, 2008
SC this is a heart wrenching and beautifully penned poem.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
SC this reminds me of women today who tries so hard to be strong and brave and show their weak side because their heart has been broken. Thank you as usual for sharing a great write.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Oh how sad, please come back with II for she needs to find her true love. You can do it SC please. You can't let her out there all alone with no hope of love. Great write! Please, Love, Bonnie


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