Years ago, I bought a basket,
Plain, unappealing –
Weave already unraveled,
I only paid one dollar –
I set the basket on the shelf,
Separated, secluded –
And there it stood,
Unbefitting the decor –
I filled that basket,
With defeated dreams –
My lonely heart,
My deserted thoughts –
I loaded that basket,
With yearning love –
My unspoken need,
My every want –
I found myself gazing,
Often, in fondness –
A beautiful reminder,
For somber times –
My hands may be empty,
My pockets uninhabited –
Aloneness taking its toll,
Privation draping its veil –
The basket stands proud,
Holding seeds of intangibility –
Unfaltering in its stance,
Draped with valor, still –
This Christmas I give you,
An empty basket –
Weave already unraveled,
All I could afford was a dollar –
The Empty Basket received 4th place win in the March, 2008 PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest.
http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contest_current_winners.asp
Anna
EDWIN
Thank you for the GIFT!
Keep on writing!
John Michael
Profound spiritual truth---well communicated- thankyou : )
Thank you for such a blessed and warm poem Deb!
Awesome important message given in a creative way!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings, Inner Peace and Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxo
STay Positive!
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Belinda
Very deep message in this piece. What I like about it most is how masterfully you brought it full circle. Hugs~
Sheila
Regis
Over the years, sages in varying words have suggested we have a box into which we throw the ravages of our yearning souls, a box titled, "Things for God to handle."
A few years ago I spent months diligently studying the paperback textbook The Portable Jung, (an exposition of the writings of psychiatrist Carl G. Jung, edited by Joseph Campbell). Now, I realize I could have saved myself a lot of sweat by simply reading and contemplating your poem The Empty Basket.
Somewhere on a shelf or in a mind, we all have an Empty Basket. To recognize it and to give it it's due worth is another matter.
Thank you for a meaningful and provocative work. A treasure!
Richard
Filled with love and dreams!!
Love Tinka
Unique depícting of sensitive memories... "The Empty Basket"
is a glowing page to enrich the AMERICAN FINE LETTERS.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
God bless you. Kathy
always,
randy