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Lost
by Rebekah Rosie Lang → (All Poetry by Rebekah Rosie Lang)
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This type of poem is called a "Quatern". It is a 16 line French form composed of each line with 8 syllables. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each stanza! (quatrain) line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)
Can I find my way back to Joy? Can I find happiness also? Let me play piano again. Let peace of mind come to me now. Melodies I play very well. Can I find my way back to Joy? Happiness is within my reach! Where is my peace of mind these days? Brain lesion brings bad news now. Piano playing brings light. Can I find my way back to Joy? Peace of mind I will find in time. Piano is my sanity. Second Lesion not so bad, right? Peace of mind I slowly find out. Can I find my way back to Joy? Written by Becca E Henry on January 27^th, 2005 at 9:30am Central time, all rights reserved!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Blessings of love and peace to you, Becca. Regis

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on January 28, 2005

This is beutifully written. God bless you.

M.Rose

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 27, 2005

A great write Becca as always
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

This is awesome. You excel at form poetry. Inspired write.

Reviewed by Dave Harm

You can find peace of mind with your piano and your poetry. Keep writing...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

I enjoy your poetry too and I see that it has not affected your style keep going.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

I very much appreciate this poetry.
For me poetry often starts itself...then I find the strict meter and rhyme it has started with- and left me to complete, and I think, "Oh thanks a lot."
I remember "Letter Lovers Love Letter" was like that. The first line is there, and now I have to keep going with that insanity of alliteration.
My latest poem posted now has an interesting structure. I love it when they come that way.
Much admiration for your work,
John