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Jennave Belleu Coz

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Cracked Cake
by Jennave Belleu Coz → (All Poetry by Jennave Belleu Coz)
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Sad Baker



I made my love
A cake of heart

I filled it with
The best of my stuff

'Cept for the Rum
Strong and spicey

It puffed up
Really nicely

Except for the part where
It started to crack

That gave me a panic attack

Oh my thought I
While frosting it red

I should have made pie, instead.


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 Reviews of "Cracked Cake"
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
I'd a eaten the cake or pie, that's just the way I am.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on September 30, 2007
Keep your heart close to the cake. What frosting do you use on your heart Jen? This is a wonderful write. Only make pie when you are done eating the cake!
My very best regards,
Chris

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 28, 2007
Naw, show your cracks. He'll still like you.

Kathy

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on September 28, 2007
Clever write. Keep the cake and cover the crack with icing. :>)

George

Reviewed on September 27, 2007
My mother always said if a cake cracks it's more moist! Don't know but your poem was clever Jen.

Reviewed on September 27, 2007
At least you can cook! I can, but I don't like to. I'd rather eat out, let someone else do the cookin' for me! LOL Well done, Jennave!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on September 27, 2007
Aw, Jen,

All he'll care about is that you made it with your own two hands. :) 'Nuff said. :) Who cares if it's cracked: ain't we all? LOL Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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