You Reign In My Mind (collaboration) (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

You Reign In My Mind (collaboration)
by Amber V Moonstone → (All Poetry by Amber V Moonstone)
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William and Amber are at it again!

You Reign In My Mind By: William Bonilla “D’Artagnan” & Amber “V” Moonstone 11/02/08 *~~ William Inhale the wind, close your beautiful eyes Breath me deep within you Into the most passionate inter sanctum Of your heavenly breast Nourish my every desire of you Dream of me For my kisses fly towards you On the wings of Pegasus ~Amber~ I see only you, within the depths of my heart Your touch is softly divine, You bring my desires to climatic heights, That fills me with contentment. Bask in our moonlight, Fly with me as if Pegasus has adorned You with temptations filled with my lover’s breath. Lend your touch and, velvet kisses, to quench my burning embers. Delve into my unending desires, And find starlight magic In each flicker of my eyes. Rendering you helpless During my reign in your mind.**

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Very well done to both of you. Very loving and romatic poem.

Ed

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 8, 2008

A sweet collaborative write indeed, Amber. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 7, 2008

So lovely and so romantic. Blessed hands have worked on this

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 6, 2008

I am transported into the passionate realms of exquisite sensual delight! You two should do a book!Fantastic collab!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

You both should do a book, this is glorious!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Always good when you two are 'at it again!' Love the graphic, too.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Breath taking as always..beautiful writing sweet lady and also sweet man...Hugss,much love too you both

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

A mystical passion of two burning hearts as one,, beautiful Amber and William!
Love,Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

I see that the collaboration from Fee's party are going strong!
You two shouldn't come, when together, near a gas station!

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 5, 2008

As always, I lovely collaboration.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

It looks like you are enjoying your collaboration!
"Rendering you helpless
During my reign in your mind."
These are lovely lines to end the poem.

Axilea

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Thank You Amber
for once again gracing my contributive portion
of this lovely Collaboration Between you and I
I always look forward to your creative ability to
make a collaboration a success
Love, Peace and Passion

William

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Well done you two. Good collaboration from two hearts writing as one entity.
fee