Ahhh....so very elloquent & beautiful Viv, in so many ways too
for the love of poetry, the love of another person, even the love of the imagined ideal love perhaps represents, or the love of self too...But More Than Anything The Beauty of Love in The Power of Poetry...this is a wonderful inspiration you have penned
Much Love & Inspiration
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
Dear Amber, You proved to the world that love as you see it starts in the mind to finish in reality or on the paper. Nice poem, the truth is the best lie. Emile
Love that drinks from the ink of a passionate pen - Marvelous!
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2008
Terrific last stanza, Amber! I like your choice of "passion red" for your font. I found it interesting that your subject is in love with the "image" of a woman rather than the woman herself. I like how much of the "action" in your poem goes on in the mind and heart and am especially intrigued by the line: "your manly powers draw her femininity to your mindful thoughts."
When Miranda Nolan inherits a house she soon discovers a need to solve the mysteries surrounding the late owner along with resolving the strong attraction she feels for a co-claimant who lost his hearing and faces a world of silence.
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from beginning to end.
I like the clear metaphor,
presented in a direct way.
Axilea
it is that love, that drinks
from the ink
of your
Passion’s Pen.
This last stanza blew me away
Love,
Becca~
Edwin
for the love of poetry, the love of another person, even the love of the imagined ideal love perhaps represents, or the love of self too...But More Than Anything The Beauty of Love in The Power of Poetry...this is a wonderful inspiration you have penned
Much Love & Inspiration
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
nice...
Art Sun...
Be always safe,
Karen
love to you,
Christine
Love & peace be with you
Thank You For sharing
William
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful craft, poetry.
Mary
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D