Time Is Not The Enemy! (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 18, 2009

I definitely get the sense that you live this write, Amber. This is wise advice, needed more in these crazy times. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on November 13, 2009

I agree Amber, this is a great reminder of what I already know and am still learning to apply. :)

Axilea

Reviewed by Barbara Henry

Reviewed on November 10, 2009

Amber,
This poem is wonderfully true,and you have expressed its great truth so well.
I applaud you for this work.
To your continued success/ Barbara Henry

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on November 9, 2009

What makes this so well done is that I can argue with the premise while still enjoying the art. Few poets can manage that. Good for you!

Reviewed by Daniel Gereige

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

An Inspiring Poem!! Well Done!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

a much inspired message, Amber ... time is not the enemy, it's the nurturer of both the beginning and the end ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

i agree-time is a gift, every second of it!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 8, 2009

Time is not the enemy but surely it works overtime to give us that impression, because my friend, if somebody never lies...they are the wrinkles! And many beautiful ladies can age graciously holding that glow of silky roses.

Georg

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

This poem speaks to the essence of who I am. Sadly, I'd lost sight of me and let quick sand try to drag me down. It worked [for a while], but then I found myself while looking for something else. I am blessed to have had the tenacity to stay "on the prowl."

Your words speak volumes of encouragement. I am copying this and keeping it with me. You know, just in case...

Thank you and may God continue to bless you. Kath

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

I've become a very humble person Amber. Before, I would say I was humble but I never realized what it meant until I almost died twice in a few months. My positivity took over when I was at the bottom and I vowed to get my health back. I was on dialysis for renal failure and then....my kidneys started to work on their own. I recall my nurse crying when she heard it. I was taken off dialysis and put on insulin. I wasn't having that either. Now I am insulin free, no meds for kidneys and I'm picking up the pieces and going home where I belong. I'm as positive as I can be about everything and my old attitude gave way to humbleness. There is so much more in the simple things in life than there was before and believe me, this woman shines .
Thank you for this tribute and I assure you I missed that beautiful smile of yours too.
Love,
peace and harmony!
Susan

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

ditto Peter

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

I also like theh line that John did. This is awesome! Thank you Amber.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

"Time is not the enemy,
Fear is!"

Excellent, Amber.

John

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

And it all starts here & now! Yes Yes Yes!
There is no time like the present! I totally agree :)
Besides� tomorrow is always a day away anyway :)..so why not!
Peace, Love & Totally Groovy Vibes 2U
You Movin & Groovin Soul Sister!!
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Good advice here, Amber; well done! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

It is never too late and what about today? Your words bounce with wisdom and inspiration :)
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

I've heard it said that the definition of God is the omnipresent "here-and-now." When we dwell in the past (resentment) or fret about the future (fear) it is like leaving the confines of where "God" resides and venturing off on our own. No wonder it's so scary out there. The two most damaging and fear-based words in the English language are "what if?" It has been suggested that we replace "what if" with "don't project." Then we are transported softly back into the moment, which you nicely described. Okay, that's all for now. What if this review is too lengthy???????

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 7, 2009

Very powerful and uplifting write. I also am delighted to see two of my favorite lady writers returning to the family fold. Welcome home sisters.
hugs
fee