Are You Going The Wrong Way? (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on December 21, 2009

nothing is more important than life itself, sobering thoughts

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on December 19, 2009

VERY SAD........... Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

This is so incredibly sad, Amber...you told it well.

Reviewed by Ankin Timourian

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Very sad incident, I couldn't hold my tears...You wrote it so naturally, words are flowing straight from your soul...
Love, Ankin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Having personally experienced someone carrying out this act, I agree with you, Amber. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

....if only someone could always guide the one headed in the wrong direction, such a sad poem, my sons school mate took his young life a few months ago and if only.....if only........

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Dear Amber V, I fully understand your feeling. I only hope that this man who went in the wrong direction is safe. It happen to me when I first went from France to Germany. At that time Germany had already the high way ( Autobahn ). Merry Christmas to you and yours. Love Emile

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Amber,

The love for your fellow man shines in these heartbroken lines. I pray he found the help he needed, and that you find peace. You are in my prayers.

(((HUGS))) and love, and Merry Christmas!, Karla.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Amber, You are a compassionate soul. This destitute young man was lost for some reason and had given up. I commend you for caring. Please check on him and get back here to tell us how hr's doing.
It's Christmas and a time to do good for others. Your thoughts for this fella and the worry you still have is compassion the world can certainly use.
God bless you!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

such terrible sadness-well written, so glad he recieved help

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Years ago I happened upon a newspaper article about a suicide- and it haunted me- much like you describe.
I finally wrote a poem, "Alarms."
It hurts!
Thanks for caring!

John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Sadly, Amber, this is not the happiest time of the year
for some. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

There's a lot of confusion and desperation these days. Thanks for sharing this. Be good.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Unless you have experienced the feelings of hopelessness you will never understand suicide attempts. When someone attempts to end there life it is because that person is in so much pain death is the only way to stop it.

GOD BLESS, I hope You never face the feeling of hopelessness.
Tony

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

It is sad but for the person who is suicidal it is usually to the point that they feel it is the only alternative. Depression is an illness that strikes so many and if untreated leads to just such thoughts and acts.
fee

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

suicide also creates deep wounds &
horrific scars for those people
within their life circle left to
suffer their loss to this person
it is unending in many ways too...
Emotional Devestation Hurts
Peace, Love & Emotional Fufillments
Vickie

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Agree with both Georg and Roger

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

Dear Amber, according to Nation Magazine, there are 131,000 homeless Vets, and about 18 suicides per day among America�s 25 million Vets and nobody is doing anything about!

Georg

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on December 18, 2009

When I can disagree with your premise and still enjoy your craftsmanship, THAT'S good writing. You pass the test.