Another collaboration with my dearest friend, William Bonilla..Thank You William for your beautiful words and passionate soul!
Succulent Fruits of Love
by Amber "V" Moonstone
and
William D'Artagnan Bonilla
~Amber~
Beneath the surface of our dreams
lies our passionate fruits
they grow to a ripened
state where tenderness dwells.
Where each ripened moment
tantalizes and teases
until the juices flow
with sweet abandon.
Reveling in each honey drop,
setting fire to our passions,
bringing succulent sweetness
to each tender kiss.
The river of honey flows
within our warm embrace
lending sweetness and lust-filled
moments of passion's banquet.
~William~
I drown in the sweet nectar
Produced by the ripen
Fruits of our passion
With every greedy
Gentle lick.
I enjoy
Succulently kissing away
The moisten dew resting
Upon the rose bud
That awakens me
with the scent
Of expectation.
I feel trembling hands
Grasping and guiding
My senses
To the edge of the forest
Where golden silk
Like Spanish moss abounds
In softness and delight.
I try not to hide within
But devour the scent
That weaken my knees
I try to whisper "I Love You"
your incoherent moans
Drown every word exiting
My trembling lips.
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Reviews of "Succulent Fruits of Love (a collaboration)"
Sounds like a fruitful love affair gone wet ... hum, that is a necessary pleasure ... wet. You two have a fuel that pulsates very well in this writing. Thanks for the collaborative endeavor; it is very good--very enticing.
Kate goes for 'WilliAmber' I'll take 'AmberWill' because it sounds like an exotic plant to me or a healing herb or potion. Love this work from both of you, Amber and William, you are very good together and no collaboration is ever easy; I know I can't do it, just can't, because I wouldn't show up with the words on time never mind anything else.
In admiration,
John
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
Passion oozes from this beautiful collaboration! Loved it! Hugs to both of you ...
This is beautifully counterpointed yet melting with the synthesis of two voices which, as it were, have "eyes" only for each other! :)) One voice is honeyed and yielding, the other fevered and voracious. I love the single focus, the total abandonment, the trusting, open and honest vulnerability, in short, the no holds barred. So true of passion that is both of the moment and one that constantly endures and rekindles a whole life long. Explodes off the page with sheer exhuberance - a WilliAmber collab that has been worth the wait... see, even your names proclaim the match! Bless you both xx
Wow! Well this poem certainly played itself out because by the end I was telling myself to take deeper breaths and calm down!
Very nice you two !!!
Blessings,
Christine
Thank you Amber
for once again inviting me to collaborate
with one of the best romantic authors
at our Den its always a great pleasure
to share my passion with your great talent....
Love & peace e be with you
Enjoy twists and surprising turns in this erotic collection of sexy love stories based on seven classic fairy tales. There are romantic interludes to touch your heart and plenty of scorching sex to warm your coldest nights.
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Scrumptious leaps to mind. . .led by H O T !!
Good show, you guys, good show.
xOx Phyllis xOx
(N: believe "lies" should be lie re "fruits." :))
Peace,
Dayvid
In admiration,
John
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Very nice you two !!!
Blessings,
Christine
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
for once again inviting me to collaborate
with one of the best romantic authors
at our Den its always a great pleasure
to share my passion with your great talent....
Love & peace e be with you
William