Paramour (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on October 15, 2010

beautiful as always Viv
I especially love the claiming
in the last line
"Paramour's story"
this is beautiful

Love's Ethereal Bounty & Caress
Vickie

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on October 13, 2010

strong seduction, beautiful sentiments.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 12, 2010

You can feel the passionate feelings within each line Amber, great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by RM Green

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

The sensuality just oozes from these words... powerful write! Lovely...

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on October 7, 2010

...............amour expressed so well I can picture the essence of love unrequited. The picture is so perfect for this poem too. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

I love the "illicit thoughts" bookends. And all between is filled with passion! You've drawn me into a lover's space with your words Amber.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

mysterious sensuality in this gem of a poem, Amber!

ET

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

well very passionate, Amber and just who do you want as your Paramour?

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

Deep emotions in a beautiful setting Amber~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

beautiful!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 6, 2010

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

What passion in this, Amber!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Expressions of passions reaching new heighs as your pen flows fluently all the way through. Reach for the stars through the joys of mother earth...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Beautifully written. I like how you've welded romance and nature, for they are so closely entwined in spirit. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Dear Amber, You have a great imagimation and perfect feeling for love.
God Bless you. Emile

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Excellent writing beautiful lady...that photo is divine...oh my....keep smiling always OK..Hugsss..much love to you

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

The sheer control in this writing, Amber, is admirable and highly rewarding for the reader; so much thought through and expressed succinctly.
Fine work indeed.

John

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Amber,

Beautiful metaphoric poem.

Mary

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

WOW! My HEART and SOUL is touched beyond! Sweet Viv!
I love this poem and where your heart was, when you were writing it... Hey, I'll call ya'... Some things are taken place shortly, I am going for MY "CULINARY ARTS" degree, is ONE! and Working P.T. shortly... I am feeling my roots... WHERE I need to be NOW!
Love and Hugs Hon, SHEEooox
This intriguing poem will stay with me for a longggg time! TY!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Beautiful artistry!
I can relate to this, the ebb and flow, the emptiness and denial giving way to the sweetness and secrets of the heart ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

I would love to have a "paramour' in my life. But my time has passed me by. Nicely written piece, Dear Lady.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Sounds like the etheric delivery system for Enochian Magic... intriguing, to say the least. These tidal surges rise within, impossible to control; but easy to channel if one is adept in such forbidden arts. I like this poem. Emotive and vivid. Take care.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

Ah but where would we be without these "illicit thoughts" and the passions that they awaken? Thank you for sharing this engagin offering, Amber. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 5, 2010

We who stray leave more than passion behind.