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WHEN SHE SPEAKS
when she speaks, her feminine voice
kisses my ears and my understanding
waking the love poet deep in my soul
forcing me to pen for her, rotund verses
pregnant with tender love, molten lust
she is a vermillion sun slowly rising
on the cobalt horizon of my yearning
turning the euphoric wheel of desire
in the direction of her scented breath
she speaks and all of nature’s bounty
gathers within the shelter of her poetry
soft gold and pink of roses and dawn
washing over my senses with wonder
sacred indigo and ebony of midnight
invite me to follow close behind her
for when she speaks i listen in awe
and long to become part of her poem
DJA 6/24/2010
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Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2010
Once again DJA you have taken my breath away with such romantic words and as you already know I love romance..(Sighh).....oh my Hugss...have a wonderful evening OK...
Love,
Chanti Lace
"...a vermilion sun slowly rising on the cobalt horizon of my yearning..." visually perfect and totally right...as is the entire work.
My hat's off, DJ!
You know, Don Juan Amante, I start smiling before I even get to the words ~ and after I read your poems I feel a whole lot less weary than when I first turn on my computer. It's like a latte or a nap, You are a refreshing comfort to many of us I'm sure ~ I have to thank you!
Christine
When He Speaks,
He turns my mundane life into fantasy,
speaking to my deepest desires and passions,
He knows what to say, and when to say it,
He knows how to make me feel like a passionate woman
filing my heats vibretto with the softness of an erotic
melody of passionate love and tender embraces,
all to fulfill secret fantasies and long endured loneliness.
See what your poetry does to me? You are so goooooooood!!!!!
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Love,
Chanti Lace
My hat's off, DJ!
John
Christine
patmedlin
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
He turns my mundane life into fantasy,
speaking to my deepest desires and passions,
He knows what to say, and when to say it,
He knows how to make me feel like a passionate woman
filing my heats vibretto with the softness of an erotic
melody of passionate love and tender embraces,
all to fulfill secret fantasies and long endured loneliness.
See what your poetry does to me? You are so goooooooood!!!!!
Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"