one glance from your alluring jewels
has been enough to seal my fate forever
for one brush of your pomegranate lips
I would battle a score of fierce dragons
and die willingly with its taste on my tongue
if only I might perish enfolded in your arms
with the hope to watch over you eternally
the satin smoothness of white shoulders
yielded and warm beneath my fingertips
their salty sweet flavor inviting my lips
to ravish each inch of your rose petal skin
full bosom a gentle rise beneath your lace
is more temptation than any man's hands
or lips could manage to staunchly resist
your fragrance fills my senses and dreams
with the sweet longings of love and lust
to lie with you face to face until at dawn
shadows flee away, to be within your heat
to fill you and hear your pleasured cries
this alone can fulfill my purpose as a man
My Lady, this strong man is mastered by
the feminine flutter of your dark lashes
and the provocative pout of carmine lips
I will forever be your lover, your servant
come to me in golden glow of candlelight
when our chamber doors are bolted tight
and the outside world is of no consequence
rhapsodic and detailed in it's erotic thought. Tastefully, you haven't attempted to depict the erotic act, which is fortunate, at least to me. Feelings alone should carry this piece to a satisfying conclusion. I enjoyed the read sir. Bob
DJ
Where have you been??? This is undoubtedly one of your very best passionate poems. Pant Pant......
Let's lock the doors and have no consequences!
Peace and love,
Amber
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2016
Any woman would take up with a man who treats
her with respect and romance as you write in this
poem...Beautiful!
Fantastic wordplay abounds herein, Don Juan. Every word works toward satisfying the lady in sito, and each line carries you closer and closer to being in place.
Who knew the Wright's had a trunk full of hidden family secrets? Searching for treasure and hidden family secrets is one way to fuel the flames of passion.
This will be smoking for years and years!
You are one hot tamale, Don Juan Amante.
A jewel for sure thanks for sharing this gem
Happy New Year and peace be with you and your family
William
Where have you been??? This is undoubtedly one of your very best passionate poems. Pant Pant......
Let's lock the doors and have no consequences!
Peace and love,
Amber
her with respect and romance as you write in this
poem...Beautiful!
Always,
Deborah
Ron
Rebecca