Sorry!!! I had to remove the first posting. It was not intended to go in for the competition.
Apologies for the inconvenience.
I am reposting here two comments received.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar 2/10/2004
excellent!
Reviewed by karla dorman 2/10/2004
(((peter))) i love it when you write haiku with elements of sparkling humor! great job--love them all, but the second one really made me LOL *ouch!* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
Apologies for the inconvenience.
I am reposting here two comments received.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar 2/10/2004
excellent!
Reviewed by karla dorman 2/10/2004
(((peter))) i love it when you write haiku with elements of sparkling humor! great job--love them all, but the second one really made me LOL *ouch!* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)