Michelle,
This one goes straight to my library. I like how you balance nature and sensuality with class. Though parts are provocative, you do not go over the edge. What I like most about this poem is the unique phrasing - such as "on the backs of the falling leaves" and "my summit to conquer". In fact, as a fellow gal, that last part had me chuckling knowingly- very clever. Love and Hugs~
Sheila
Metaphors laced with eroticism. Love, in the leaves. Love, love. You must be in love to pen such raw passion. May you wear the moutains about your naked skin with impunity. JMW
...of love...wonderful words so sensual...and passionate pen can only find autumn leaves...to return again...and again.
excellent work Michelle...
John
Good Morning Michelle
ahhhhh.... the canvas of your poetic expressions embrace purity of love; also your poems vividness delights & endevors all of us into the sensual imbue of love's exotic experience!
Lovely Write Beautiful Poetess!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
"we smelled of autumn and wind and i forgot my watch on your bedside table making time soar on the backs of the falling leaves," such beautiful lines. I've never seen this painting...but you have painted a beautiful picture with your words here.
This one goes straight to my library. I like how you balance nature and sensuality with class. Though parts are provocative, you do not go over the edge. What I like most about this poem is the unique phrasing - such as "on the backs of the falling leaves" and "my summit to conquer". In fact, as a fellow gal, that last part had me chuckling knowingly- very clever. Love and Hugs~
Sheila
Regis (Reg) xo
excellent work Michelle...
John
ahhhhh.... the canvas of your poetic expressions embrace purity of love; also your poems vividness delights & endevors all of us into the sensual imbue of love's exotic experience!
Lovely Write Beautiful Poetess!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Blessings,
Vesna :)
Newfie Hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
That must have been some painting. - Gene
John
nice...
Art Sun...
Fee
Edwin