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Where she lives
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A writing prompt inspired this, a set of poems, the other I posted a second ago-where he lives.



 

 

there's a lone house that sits

in the middle of an empty field

and though no one harvests

there's always much to yield

 

paint the color of snow

wood shutters a shiny red

the roof is all new tile

and floors where no feet tread

 

cars pass by and admire it

they even think about buying

sometimes she feigns to believe them

but deep down she knows they're lying

 

she sees the house upon the hill

and wonders if inside it might hold

a man much like this lady inside her

who's feeling like she's so old

 

oh sure, she seems well on the outside

and her admirers think she's complete

but they sometimes forget she is human

and then from her life  they retreat

 

inside her the wood is rotting

like that of a house long ago

she cries to herself in the silence

of the places her body must go

 

Yet that house on the hill seems so lovely

and all of this fits into her equation

that even if a house seems rundown

the heart is in the foundation

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Where she lives"
Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on September 8, 2008
This went well with the other poem... So much story between the walls. Well done. lindalaw

Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on September 8, 2008
Hi Michelle,
I enjoy the easygoing pace of your poetry. I can take my time and look around the old house and pick-up the echo of family life long ago. This brings out the physicist in me. Matter and Energy are neither destroyed or created, the sum total of both remaining constant, and each ever transforming one into the other. A conservation law of the universe. Love is like that, the energy of it is absorbed and then transformed into new life, then released as love again. The love remains in the structure, awaiting the resonance of new life to draw it out again. You are a good writer Michelle. Best regards, Rockie Coppolella

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 7, 2008
Michelle this is so lovely and I could feel the sadness as if it were my own. Lovely write, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by William Potter
Reviewed on September 7, 2008
How many lonely people sit around wondring about others of their kind?

Another beautiful write!

I'm on to Where he lives...

William

Reviewed on September 7, 2008
Oh, this is gorgeous, Michelle. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Where he lives...where she lives...hopefully, a where THEY live?

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on September 7, 2008
Beautiful!!!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 7, 2008
After reading this "Where HE Lives" and now this one I can only hope and guess there will be a third one. I believe that homes do have their own hearts and souls that are breathed life by the people who occupy them, sometimes they are neglected and left alone but hopefully sooner or later someone will come along to love and make them whole again. I think this definatley needs a part three where these two houses come together...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 6, 2008
You are on a roll of inspiration dear Michelle. This also reminds me of the Beatles' song, "Fool On The Hill." I find this powerfully symbolic and meaningful; worthy of much more than a single reading as are so many (most probably all) of your poems. Thank you. Love, hugs, and best wishes for all that is good to you,

Regis xo


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