"I'm home," you said into the place where I stored myself
tucked away alongside the jam jars full of preserves
with checkered lids and old hair ribbons on the necks
snuggled up close to the bag of sugar and an oatmeal drum
and that half-used box of baking soda we meant to throw away
but the sun came up on summer skies and we ran to them
In me, always, you rent out sections of my weary soul,
always remembering to turn on the overhead lights,
to put out the trash and start a good fire in the hearth
and when you settle into the bed on the flannel sheets,
your toes sticking up like the masts of sailboats,
although we are two it is a one that is wholly at peace
From here, the fading lights slice the mountains in two,
powdering the face of the lake with an unearthly glow,
so from these windows shared we can sigh for beauty,
by the length of the trees and the curve of our joining,
the crook of your arm a pillow where my head rests
and your large hands combing slowly through my hair
Seasons without meanings of silver or ebony spun thick,
no autumnal glories slipping into long icy winters alone,
but taut is this loving thing balanced on a trembling arrow's tip,
pulled and awaiting the pluck of a finger skilled and strong,
precarious though it is, this anticipation and its release,
when eternity sings, here I will remain, proclaiming you bold.
observing and painting all the details.
At the same time, you always find the
evocative, inspiring way of sharing them
with a rich palette of emotions.
Axilea
stan
that second stanza. Thank you for this. -gene.
Regis
A glorious reunion between separated loves: the first two stanzas is the homecoming; the third and fourth is fireworks and fun and light and RELEASE. How do you do it? Each supercedes the next as my favorite. You did it again: sublime.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
This is absolutely a breathtaking poem. I especially love this part:
"From here, the fading lights slice the mountains in two,
powdering the face of the lake with an unearthly glow,
so from these windows shared we can sigh for beauty,
by the length of the trees and the curve of our joining,"
You are quite amazing, and your visual affect on the reader makes me speechless.
I truly have enjoyed this poem this morning.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
hugs
Fee
This is why we keep coming back to your den. Thank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Edwin
Be always safe,
Karen
Your wondrous talent with words accompany the art of painting and takes it to a higher level. This piece from you is truly mesmerizing.
SENSATIONAL!
Happiness always, Stuart