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Unconditional
by Michelle M Mead → (All Poetry by Michelle M Mead)
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Based on the painting "Full River" by Aleksander Titovets


 

 

By its sharp edges I was encompassed whole

I lay stuck skin on icy surfaces atop of a shoal

with chipping hearts to break off like ice floes

cracks that spread as you crawl into their holes

 

 

drowned this frozen angel on a crooked cross

to follow you anywhere- and anywhere lost

chilled death on wood sleds to hold and to keep

reflections seen glassy as cold passions sleep

 

 

not concerned with this precipice I walk along

though they stab at my feet with right and wrong

I still hush all the loud voices calling me to repent

if only for a chance to love you to my detriment

 

 

for you these small wishes for skies of snow blue

to ever hurt you would split my soul’s heart in two

golden silence and frail protection wrapped up with a bow

keeping secrets that only spring’s melting will know


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 Reviews of "Unconditional"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 7, 2009
I like the lyrical rhythm here. Fantastic lines, Michelle!
Sheila

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on January 1, 2009
S u p e r b !

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 1, 2009
Such a beautiful melancholic yet soothing piece, just great!
'if only for a chance to love you to my detriment'
Wow, love that line and love this work, masterful.
I checked out the artist you mentioned, awesome stuff!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 1, 2009
Michelle, the flow of your poem reminds me of a beautiful song popularized by singer Ed Ames in the 1960's, Time, Time -- "the summer was golden,their love young and new, his bold arms her rendezvous" -- one of my all time favorite,pop songs -- a very beautiful poem of romance -- may love and peace be yours this day -- JMW

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Michelle,

You have expressed your love and the sad feelings so well with this poem. This is superbly written.

Happy New Year to you!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Forecast: pain and sorrow
Outlook: there's tomorrow
Can one love someone unconditional?
Be honest; be rational; be radical . . . . .
Be taken advantaged of - Be used - Abused.
Which cheek stings worse - the second or the first.

What poetry! Always Exceptional and I "unconditionally' love to read.
Doug

Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
A very nice way of expressing that "love hurts"...
Best of all things to you, now and throught the coming year,
Jim

Reviewed by Shedding Light
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
A very lovely write!!!!

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Your Love Is Tenderly Beautiful
Your Heart Sings in the bounty of "Unconditional"
Lovely Soothing Poem Michelle
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced
Vickie

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Wonderful poetry~have a happy new year

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Great metaphors and an enjoyable read. Blessings to you.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Fabulous final strophe, Michelle, and I love the rarified atmosphere you create: clean lines with their seamless fusion of concrete images and glistening concepts. Delicate but strong. A very happy new year to you. Kate xx

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Michelle, this poem is beautiful and a joy to read.

Cheers and happy New Year!
Dan

Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Beautifully penned Michelle and soul touching poetry.

Reviewed by B Wise (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
I really love this. Great feeling deeply expressed and it resonated.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
As usual you give us the best Michelle. Thank you for sharing. Happy New Year to you and yours.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
A chill intrigue. What will the melting snow show?
Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
The metaphors of art to live and live to art are captured in this for the greatest inspiration for most writers and artists is that of affairs of the heart. To be able to combine the passion, highs and lows, rights and wrongs and ups and downs of love into the painting of an artist is magic. Very well done Michelle.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
Very moving interpretation, indeed. I love your panoramic word-tapestries!!!

Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Michelle,

One feels the chill in the imagery of having been hurt in these lines, and yet, there is hope: the gentle sunshine of true agape love. Well done!

((((HUGS)))) and love, and Happy New Year!, Karla.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 30, 2008
Excellent interpretation
Of the vision before you
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you and your family
Wishing you all A Happy New Year

William


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