By its sharp edges I was encompassed whole
I lay stuck skin on icy surfaces atop of a shoal
with chipping hearts to break off like ice floes
cracks that spread as you crawl into their holes
drowned this frozen angel on a crooked cross
to follow you anywhere- and anywhere lost
chilled death on wood sleds to hold and to keep
reflections seen glassy as cold passions sleep
not concerned with this precipice I walk along
though they stab at my feet with right and wrong
I still hush all the loud voices calling me to repent
if only for a chance to love you to my detriment
for you these small wishes for skies of snow blue
to ever hurt you would split my soul’s heart in two
golden silence and frail protection wrapped up with a bow
keeping secrets that only spring’s melting will know
Sheila
'if only for a chance to love you to my detriment'
Wow, love that line and love this work, masterful.
I checked out the artist you mentioned, awesome stuff!
You have expressed your love and the sad feelings so well with this poem. This is superbly written.
Happy New Year to you!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Outlook: there's tomorrow
Can one love someone unconditional?
Be honest; be rational; be radical . . . . .
Be taken advantaged of - Be used - Abused.
Which cheek stings worse - the second or the first.
What poetry! Always Exceptional and I "unconditionally' love to read.
Doug
Best of all things to you, now and throught the coming year,
Jim
Harold M. Nash
Your Heart Sings in the bounty of "Unconditional"
Lovely Soothing Poem Michelle
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced
Vickie
Cheers and happy New Year!
Dan
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Ron
hugs
fee
One feels the chill in the imagery of having been hurt in these lines, and yet, there is hope: the gentle sunshine of true agape love. Well done!
((((HUGS)))) and love, and Happy New Year!, Karla.
Of the vision before you
Thanks for sharing
Love & peace be with you and your family
Wishing you all A Happy New Year
William