Much was found within my dark red boat
relics of some small tropical islands remote
where we absconded one fine summer day
when all the others had jeered and turned away
we knew that our time had come at last
and how some people would be all aghast
at the insanity of our May-December tale
that prompted us both to set out our sails
the tides would be high this we surely knew
for many were the storms starting to brew
in the rough and wild waters that met us there
where many a fine sailor had been ensnared
many a boat had once tossed both you and I
after the lift and fall they lost to brighter skies
so ready were we lovers to take a big chance
on the ocean vast rumbles of our rocky romance
portholes to look out towards the beyond and see
the bobbing heads of the others who all disagreed
that such a small red boat could ever last very long
and that we’d be back once we saw we were wrong
Ah, but on this far horizon they did not count
dry land with so much life where we’d dismount
to greet what life gives all lovers to share for two
despite all of those "truths" which wise people knew
A great poem about the faith it takes to sustain some loves. Even the color of the boat seems to fly in the face of all the nay-sayers. Well done:)
Sheila
All good things to you,
Jim
John
Newfie hugs, Rose
You have done that poetically.
Good use of symbolism and imagery, highlighted by the verse, "the bobbing heads of the others who all disagreed", which is an apt metaphor. YOU drew me in with one, Michelle. Well done.
Rockie Coppolella
the truths others know, are just for them
We each have our own life to live & "The Red Boat" is a wonderful poem expressing the hope of one love ideal over the status quo of a group. Dare to love & Dare to be, Dare to set sail, march to your own drum, pave your own way...YES!!
May Love Always Be The Wind In Your Sails
Much Love & Inspirations To You Den Sister
&'Happy New Year
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
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