Skidding across the lid with a splutter
from death to dust is what he muttered
man in robe of black and collar white
making sure to get each last word right
hands and heart she reached out to the Lord
prayers of peace and grace for her own accord
with brown eyes fixed on her final resting place
she drifted through the air without a trace
he was there- she saw him as she dangled in the trees
his bald head down as he prayed long on his knees
clutching papers with sweet words so long forgotten
by some people, it’s true -- but not by their begotten
rustling chipmunks scampered and overheard
the moan and tears of their love’s last word
written deep inside on the edge of their bones
his still amongst the living, though hers-- all alone
"I will love you even when we are dead"
how he wrestled with those bittersweet words that she said
but now that she’s a ghost tangled up in branches and sky
"I’m coming with you, my love," is his final reply
Sheila
I hope your health is better.
About the work, the impact is as you intended, atmospheric, ghostly, gothic and quite mysterious...this poem has a strong and lasting aftertaste.
John
Ron
Great job, enjoyed it, Michelle.
I loved this! I also love ghostly and gothic things!
Blessings and love,
~Linda
Compellingly penned, you took me there - thank you, beautifully imaged rhyme. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
hugs
fee
"True love never dies,"? This is a tough story to render effectively without sounding campy, but you have given it a light, but serious touch. Pretty good writing, Michelle. I enjoyed the imagery and message here.
Rockie Coppolella