we left things there to wander-
your favorite straw hat with the hyacinth blue ribbon,
that i wore for the bloom of your smile;
the wrap of purple and pink silks
dancing so close as they spun
into a magenta dip and golden sway;
my large straw basket
nestled close to the flowers
that i gathered before you came this morning,
nodding heads of blue and white,
sharing a beauty they eke out,
petal by petal-
no wonder it led us there-
down the path we longed to stroll,
this floral explosion as if heaven's gate,
scents to soothe and comfort our uncivilized sides-
green leafy rooftops enclose us,
our love to be made long and deep
to the magic of a birdsong,
your boat swaying by the river's edge,
waiting to carry our tired bodies home-
but blue ribbons twine souls when alone
Ron
You cut right to the point
Then stich the reader back together.
Healing the feelings that were once had.
Superb!
Lin
In Spirit,
Bear
EDWIN
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
to the magic of a birdsong,
The superb imagery that you use serves to emphasize the feelings awakened by these two verses... ...and the whole poem. Thank you for sharing this gift, Michelle. Love and blessings,
Regis
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Very nicely done.
hugs
fee