looking out upon the greying streets
mechanical people in boxes with wheels
i remember how last night we caught
fireflies in old dirty mason jars
along the edge of the lake
later beside the snapping of the fire
your tickle flutter kisses landed
such gentle feathered wings upon my neck
and just behind my pale seashell ears
sitting on the seat chest against my back
what's need or miss but this want of your hands
large and wearing the black fur of your hair upon them
sliding themselves around my full hips and down
down to spread apart the crease of my white thighs
and wander restless on this journey we've denied
pressed between your legs my own feel so free
and the pressure of your hardness against me
yes, just below the dimple of my lower back
where soft heart-shaped curves round outwards
yes, and you pushing so strong between them
kiss me again, please--
pull the lengths of my dark hair from off my back
so that from shoulders to spine I am alive
from the wet hot heat of your searching mouth
the brush of your beard and moustache pricking my skin
furry and warm I feel your chest meet up to my back
and I fill your hands as you reach around in front of me
giving rise to the ache at my very tips, my lips, my opened self
climbing to those tips and peaks with a tender touch
pulling reality far away from us and the everyday
kiss me again,
as you seek my sweetness with greedy hands
dipping into me for this warm sugared honey shared
hoping for your urgent and persistent tasting
and pleasure given in this our delectable feast
and now--
now busy city streets
if only-
greener pastures
where secrets wear freedom
but nothing else
Ron
Your use of hands is both metaphoric and palpable ...
"this want of your hands" 3rd strophe
"and I fill your hands as you reach around in front of me" 6th strophe
"as you seek my sweetness with greedy hands" 7th strophe ... yes indeed!
Hands here effectively paint a developing abandonment between lovers that slowly simmers before it boils. Beautifully expressed.
Blessings ...
Alan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
hugs
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EDWIN
The remedies for judgement from others, ohhh sooo sweet. It is such a shame when secrets must be kept, or at the least, having to feel they must be kept. Hoping your green pastures open for you.
Be Well, Carin' Spirit
poem from that painting... if I had to write one, it would be a completely different atmosphere! Multiple inspirations from the artwork.
You just exploded the Milky Way.