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Study of Woman in White Scarf
by Michelle M Mead → (All Poetry by Michelle M Mead)
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This was inspired by a painting of the same name by Russian artist, Vasili Nechitailo (1915-1980), oil on panel, 1950- see below for link to his and other Russian artwork.

This was also inspired by my love of historical dramas and period pieces.

http://www.katardat.org/russiarts/1949/index.html



Poem Artwork

 

 

Again dust kicking up and her squinted eyes

a hand that has toiled forever now salutes

against her brow to shade and guard

for beneath that hand are eyes wide open

much to see when the men head out for home

the women stop all work to find them on the horizon line

 

 

Yes, half-broken men like them come home

even if torn and the worse for wear

with turning hearts more distant than before

shamed he'll be when he sees her

but dutiful wives noses learn to smell only sweat

not her gardenia perfume on the back of his neck

 

 

lines to trace upon her face and weathered hands

not those coddled by him and the finest kid leather gloves

or fancy clothes that steal all movement and common sense

hers the hands of the everyday needs met in chores

hers the face that bore the years of his coarser traits

not the momentary fantasies of his faceless whores

 

 

No, these are the women of rich dark soil and hearty grain

women who've wrestled with the clinging vines of pain

mothered and harvested through sunshine and rain

then they'd rise the next morning to do it all over again

with extra sturdy backs God gave them to lift the weight

of everyone from child to husband to dog to full plate

 

 

Sun shone down upon her threadbare clothes

she never asked for much except that he'd come home

for oft-shaded eyes can choose not to see so much

like candy pink rouge on blue cotton shirts

or lies told at night that he unwittingly wears

like a tightening noose round his neck

 

 

White scarf the signal for her submissive toll

he crosses back into the gates left swinging free

upon the wave of that flag and the palm of her hand

then the bend of her waist to lift the pail at her feet

once more to carry in the remnants of twenty-five years

and the part of her still waiting on his half-hearted truth

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Study of Woman in White Scarf"
Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski
Reviewed on February 2, 2010
Michelle,
Study of Woman in White Scarf
stirs the emotions, nudges sad memories (of other's misadventures, in my case) as I remember a friend who lost her life at the hand of her love. Sad and powerful. Keep writing.
Love and Best wishes, Denise Nowakowski

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 27, 2010
Great write Michelle
as always I love your interpretaion
Of describing art into words
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on January 27, 2010
Leaving me speechless here. So deep. So alluring in its clarity. J'nia

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 26, 2010
This story goes beyond the woman to the one she seeks--more than the beholder beholds.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 26, 2010
As always, your artist's eye and literary mind capture only the most telling detail - which means your writing is of novel-depth in terms of what it brings us but with only a few deft lines. This is indeed what poetry is and does: this lives, breathes and has a life of its own so that the story of this woman is not only contained within the character portrait you paint with your words, but moves into the whole setting and landscape giving us a complete panorama, wide-screen version of sorrounding events. To me, your writing bears witness to the profound strength that is gained through reading widely and walking wide-and-open-eyed through all the journeyed pages. Lovely insights and perspectives here, Michelle. xx

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 26, 2010
YOU BRING TO LIGHT SO MUCH IN THIS WORK; SUBMISSION...RESOLVE...DUTY...PERSEVERANCE...AND PAIN...ALL SHE HAS EVER KNOWN. I SALUTE HER. WELL DONE AND ONCE AGAIN, YOUR WORK IS SO THOROUGHLY ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on January 26, 2010
What a stunning celebration of that truest of virtues, endurance.

Reviewed by Mark Sebring
Reviewed on January 26, 2010
This is an excellent piece.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
The power of this sketch is palpable. Your perception hauntingly real. Very fine work, Michelle! Lin

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
Michelle,
Your reading here is exceptionally sharp, especially in the opening and concluding stanzas. I like!

John

Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
OMG...I love this poem. Michelle, your poetic interpretation of this magnificent painting is phenomenal. It feels like you channeled the woman's reality. I am truly moved. Phenomenal writing! ~leslie

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
You've captured the picture to perfection! Great story of the courage and strength of the women left behind in wartime. Well done!

Anna

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
beautiful and powerful characterization, i really loved this!

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
This poem touches me deeply Michelle!
Powerfully written filled with creativity
and such a unique style! your poems
are truly a blessing I must visit you more often!


Much Love,
Margaret

P.S. Thanks Michelle for stopping by!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
Beautiful Michelle as you put your own words to tell a story.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
Michelle, I love how you do this...you have a wonderful and imaginative mind...and a gift for writing beautiful poetry.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
The words capture well your interpretation of the painting and perhaps the reality of life as many live it.
fee

Reviewed by Brenda Dobson
Reviewed on January 25, 2010
Michelle, you give so much life to this historical painting. Wonderful detailed imagery and depth. Love, Brynn


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