Again dust kicking up and her squinted eyes
a hand that has toiled forever now salutes
against her brow to shade and guard
for beneath that hand are eyes wide open
much to see when the men head out for home
the women stop all work to find them on the horizon line
Yes, half-broken men like them come home
even if torn and the worse for wear
with turning hearts more distant than before
shamed he'll be when he sees her
but dutiful wives noses learn to smell only sweat
not her gardenia perfume on the back of his neck
lines to trace upon her face and weathered hands
not those coddled by him and the finest kid leather gloves
or fancy clothes that steal all movement and common sense
hers the hands of the everyday needs met in chores
hers the face that bore the years of his coarser traits
not the momentary fantasies of his faceless whores
No, these are the women of rich dark soil and hearty grain
women who've wrestled with the clinging vines of pain
mothered and harvested through sunshine and rain
then they'd rise the next morning to do it all over again
with extra sturdy backs God gave them to lift the weight
of everyone from child to husband to dog to full plate
Sun shone down upon her threadbare clothes
she never asked for much except that he'd come home
for oft-shaded eyes can choose not to see so much
like candy pink rouge on blue cotton shirts
or lies told at night that he unwittingly wears
like a tightening noose round his neck
White scarf the signal for her submissive toll
he crosses back into the gates left swinging free
upon the wave of that flag and the palm of her hand
then the bend of her waist to lift the pail at her feet
once more to carry in the remnants of twenty-five years
and the part of her still waiting on his half-hearted truth
Study of Woman in White Scarf
stirs the emotions, nudges sad memories (of other's misadventures, in my case) as I remember a friend who lost her life at the hand of her love. Sad and powerful. Keep writing.
Love and Best wishes, Denise Nowakowski
as always I love your interpretaion
Of describing art into words
Peace be with you
William
Ron
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Your reading here is exceptionally sharp, especially in the opening and concluding stanzas. I like!
John
Anna
Powerfully written filled with creativity
and such a unique style! your poems
are truly a blessing I must visit you more often!
Much Love,
Margaret
P.S. Thanks Michelle for stopping by!
Newfie Hugs, Rose
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