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Permission To Leave
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
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Linger no longer
My dearest friend
Sever the ties of my grief

Kick through the leaves
Of your freedom
While eagerly
I await mine   


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 Reviews of "Permission To Leave"
Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on March 3, 2010
A poem about freedom that touches the heart. You touched mine.

Blessings,

JMD

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 4, 2010
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on February 2, 2010
Oh dear, the price of freedom. Patrick

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on February 1, 2010
sometimes the worst prisons are the ones within our minds. very well stated. Kathy

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 1, 2010
I will say that freedom are within the chains...but the slaves don't know it!

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 1, 2010
Nicely said, Pat.

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 31, 2010
pat,
Sometimes freedom never comes. Enjoy your style of writing and your words.

Blessings+
~Linda

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 31, 2010
Succinctly powerful in meaning intended and shared; thank you, Pat. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 31, 2010
Knowing when to sever ties, Pat. Well done with an economy of words. This poetry fits my tarot text and illustration The Navel - Tarot by Sage here at this link.
http://sagesweetwater.tripod.com/tarotbysage

Sage

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2010
Beautiful poetry.


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