AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Debra Kraft, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iAnita Shaw, iPeter Jessop, iMatt Miller, iAnn Marie Hannon, iGlen Schulz, iDebashish Haar, i Dadfire, iElisabeth Barstowe, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

pat medlin

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Stories
· Messages
· 136 Titles
· 1,420 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jun, 2007

pat medlin, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Now What Mr. Bass
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

A prisoner tied in tandem
for tangled tortured years 
Dreams squashed down like pesky bugs
morphed to formidable fears

Routine angst filled days
shared abandoned nights
wine weed and caustic words
familiar as the fights

Now cut free to live your dreams
to pursue your creative needs
you're parlyzed...afraid to find
'what happens if I suceed'

 

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Now What Mr. Bass"
Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 12, 2010
Nice work...the variety of expressions give one the opportunity to reflect upon the finality...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on December 10, 2010
This is very true Pat, especially for those of us whose lives were dictated long ago. I am not afraid of 'what happens if I succeed' because all of my life I have lived and shown the world who I am and demanded to be treated as such. But our society is filled with hatred, bigotry, discrimination, homophobia, crime, abuse, and many more dastardly things that can keep a body mired down.

What now Mr. Bass? Well, Mrs. Bass says love thy neighbor as thyself, and make sure your foot is true so you don't slip off of the stone crossing the river of love. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((((((((((MANY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))))))), your den sister, Barbie



Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
It would be the shits to succeed and find your dreams a lie. Patrick

Reviewed by Paul Drouillard
Reviewed on November 24, 2010
Pat,
Very entertaining

Paul

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 23, 2010
Very philosophical,expressed well...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 23, 2010
Pat, fantastic little poem, and I have agree with Jerry about how this has woken some sleeping memories.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 23, 2010
This is a most compelling poem, so powerful in wisdom and the complexities of human nature. Powerful ~
You have been away a long time and you have been missed!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2010
Hey! Quite frankly, my dear, I resemble this. You have moved into the area of psychosomatic feeling and dire feelings of inadequacy. Been there. Done that. Horrible. You got your teeth (fangs?) into this poem, Pat.


Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Opening Acts - 2nd Edition by David Clure

Over 40 poems in this new edition of "Opening Acts". Get yours today...  
Member BookAds

Ponderings - for those with failing eyesight by Miller Caldwell

Poor eyesight? Larger print of Poems, Short Stories a diary and an appeal for children in Court.  
Member BookAds

Next Arrivals by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,  
Member BookAds