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The Learning Of 'Alone'
by pat medlin → (All Poetry by pat medlin)
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Blanket on the ground

I sit among the smooth stones

and sleeping blossoms of my space

inches from the dancing flames

warming the fibers of my meandering thoughts.


In the peace of this hour He cocoons me

in a silence so serene

I hear neither the flutter of a leaf

or the bending of a lone blade of grass.

A silence so profound as to be recognized

as a gift of soothing balm

to the clenching chaos of my mind.


 And if there were a need

for a communing heart beside me

it would be yours...

but you are there and I am here

seperated yet bound

by fragile tendrils of trust.


And when the reverie of this evening ends

as it must

will the silence of rooms empty of you

and barren of your smell

tell a different tale...

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Learning Of 'Alone'"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 21, 2013
I want to write more praise but much here has already been said. Beautiful and emotional images juxtaposed. M.True

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2013
I can feel your emotions as I read your poem, the quiet as you sit, you pull your readers in by the fire " Learning of Alone. "
Magnificent!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 27, 2013
Leaves the reader breathless! Stunning, Pat!!!

Anna

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on May 25, 2013
So much Beauty in the Stillness,
thoughts not alone, Pat!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on May 25, 2013
Vickie you're right...it is a romantic aloneness...as when one goes off to war...the adjustments of learning to be alone.

Reviewed on May 24, 2013
this is such a romantic kind of alone...or is it me?
such an embraceful tenderness Pat & too the visuals
are stunning..I want to sit by this bon-fire

Applewood & Marshmallows
Vickie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 24, 2013
Hauntingly remembering quiet time by the fire watching the embers die before going to sleep. It's always nice to have a companion. I'm not sure is so good to rely on the one that you seem to be referring to. Much prefer a real warm body in my arms.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 23, 2013
The absence of a love that once was only shows us that love always is.
A powerful message, Pat, and written with such eloquence.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 23, 2013
Pat, you know the secret writers struggle with for years and you do it well...the secret of drawing the reader into your world and taking them on a journey...well done!
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on May 23, 2013
Beautiful poem with eloquently chosen words to tell the sad tale. Very moving indeed.

Ingeborg

Reviewed on May 23, 2013
"A silence so profound as to be recognized

as a gift of soothing balm

to the clenching chaos of my mind."

Your choice of words is profound!


Love ya!

Jane


Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 23, 2013
much sadness in the silence
budd

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on May 23, 2013
~Pat~
Sadness in heartbreak the reverie of his hour ends as it must.
Treasure the silence of peace.

Lady Mry Ann

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 23, 2013
Heartbreakingly real are the words you have chosen for this poem of being along, with thoughts and wonderment of another. The last three lines is a sad foretelling.


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