Road To Invisible (poem) by pat medlin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 9, 2013

An awesome work that touched me gently and tugged at a similar feeling within me.

Reviewed on August 7, 2013

What great complementary stanzas! I'm beginning to understand you, Pat...and that worries me.

Reviewed on August 3, 2013

Pat Medlin's poem, Road to Invisible, is very moving, touching on a subject that affects us all:
facing the slow slipping away of a loved one, and contemplating the same thing happening to oneself. Her metaphors are apt and very touching. She handles the subject very well, in a way that makes you see it, and get emotionally involved. I like this poem a lot.

Reviewed by Michael True

Reviewed on July 24, 2013

As you move us through your observations it is your reflection that makes it happen. Life is the experience. M.True

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 21, 2013

exsqusite quilting of prose!!
may yur light never fade or dim...

Shining Stars & Super Moons
Vickie

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on July 20, 2013

Very astute questioning, So
relative to many of us in
such a gentle way...

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 15, 2013

We're all travelling down the same road to invisible...and I have come to a point in my life where I don't fear death...I firmly believe it's simply the transition to another existence! Loved this poem!

Anna

Reviewed by Lark Pogue

Reviewed on July 14, 2013

You have a wonderfully creative mind. This is beautiful and sad, as so many of us won't revel in the vibrant hues.
L

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on July 14, 2013

Thank you Pat...Comparing your life to colors, which many of us
are doing right now. Througly enjoyed!

Already,

Deborah

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

Life is full of twists and turns--some we like and others well..Loved your poem

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

Life is full of expectations, but it is in the now that we must live and be born to the love at hand. Wonderful poetry.

George

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

~Pat~
Touching emotional write of pathways..invisible
or vibrant.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

Insightful write! I really enjoyed this!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

Oh please continue to revel in the vibrant hues and if you be drunk let it be with the anticipation of rebirth.
I was looking around on your Author page/background info and must say I can so relate to the last line "Perhaps beginning with fictional characters will lessen the intimidation to write some of the darker things that continue to fester in my heart."
Thanks for sharing Pat Medlin with us.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

An interesting quandary. I'll leave the answer up to you.

I, too, have kept blankets far too long until they were faded in threadbare. For me, familiarity bred contentment.

Ron

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

interesting write
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

Ahhh . . . Please, Pat go for this . . . "Or will I revel in / the still vibrant hues within... / drunk with anticipation /of rebirth."

Be true to yourself forever and a day and never, ever stop trying.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 13, 2013

Pat, you ask really good questions, and for many of us, the answer comes in the gift, the joy, the hope of anticipating rebirth...I do on a daily basis.
Cheers,
Dan