from the inside
or from the out
would i hide
or would i be about
if i was a window
would i be clean
or would i just lean
on the window pain
if i was a window
would i
could i
be a timely refrain
if i was a window
what would i know?
know what i mean?
would i have a screen?
or would i be clear?
if i was a window
would i still have my fear?
if i was a window
where would i go?
Nebraska, Alaska, or Idaho?
maybe Texas or New Mexico,
maybe Montana
maybe Why-ome
see
i like the open spaces
places to be
i like the open country
that's just me.
if i was a window
what would i see
if i wa a window
what would i be
if i was a window
what would
what could
what should
i be
if i was a window
guess i'd just be me
clear as glass
kiss my ass
waitin' for time to pass
seein' things
from the outside
to the in
a window
bringin' light in
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Reviews of "if i was a window"
Reviewed by Bobbie Hess (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2004
Good question--what if I WERE a window? What would people see through me? Makes one think and that's good. Your style is different and I like it. Thanks for the CLEARER picture . . . b
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
You could be a pane, or have a smashing time too. This is a nice feel good write..ty
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