alcohol & i
we always got by
but now they say
"it's gonna' kill you someday"
i said "no way"
someway
or the other
oh brother
see me & booze
had 'nuthin ta' lose
thought we could choose
we did what we did
never hid
we were together
thru fair & stormy weather
we were a pair
all the pain we did share
we were always there
together
alcohol & me
see
alcohol & me
we never could see
i didn't know
we were enemies
it never did show
there was always the glow
always the flow
but alcohol & i
must say "good-bye"
otherwise
i'll die
gotta' break those old ties
alcohol & i
we be old friends
but not 'till i die
not 'till the ends
good by old friends
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Reviewed by Bobbie Hess (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2004
Each minute, each day--realizing what you can be without it versus who you are with it--need I say more? Living has more to give than the bottom of any bottle. Good write . . . b
This made me smile...more than i can tell you. You don't know me...i don't know you...but i grew up with a father who was/is an active alcoholic. And even now, as a grown up...i still find myself begging him to get help for it. I see how it has destroyed him...emotionally, mentally, physically. The toll it has taken on him...and all of those who love him...can never be estimated. I am happy for you and wish you the best in your journey!
sorry for my ramble...but, this touched me...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2004
Man has alcohol,
alcohol has alcohol
alocohol has man.
I am gonna have to sell my stock in the booze companies now...LOL! Won't be easy, but if I could do it, 14 odd years ago, you can too...take it one day, as they say at AA! Peace thru Sobriety, Ed & Rufuz
This combined narrative dialogue and play is about the uncreated, unborn and undying transcendent Self of God-consciousness and Buddha-nature. It describes an odyssey of transcendent Consciousness Awakening and Remembrance.
This book presents a narrative story of one person's journey of transcendental Awakening and Enlightenment as guided by his two Sage companions. It is grounded in Zen Buddhist and Taoist perspective and uses the I Ching as its structural framework. T
sorry for my ramble...but, this touched me...
alcohol has alcohol
alocohol has man.
Brave write.
Good luck..