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old dogs & children...
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THIS WENT TO POETRY but ended up as a story...oh well here's to you, rufus & tom t. from me

old dogs & whiskey
By Steve Patterson
Monday, September 13, 2004






this one is espcially
for my friend ed & his friend rufus
a parahphrase
a copy if you will
but still
he & i & refus
and these few lines


i was sittin' in san anonio
sittin' all alone don't you know

pourin' whisky down
on that down side
when he came up beside
me ... just to see
whether it was just stormy weather
or if he might help me be

wheaher i was just pourin' 'em down
bein' from out of town
losin' a sound
that come's around
when the whiskey is all that can be found

he talked to me
about words i couldn't see
maybe they just be about me
whiskey & he
hearin' his sound

women & whiskey
they all be riskey
they get you friskey

and friends disappear
when them blues appear
don't show them your fear
don't shed a tear

"but old dog's & children
they be fine...
they don't mess with your mine
just give me watermellon wine"

"old dog's care about you
even when the blue's are true
and keep comin' around
you done heard that sound

childen... bless there hearts
they are still pure of heart
before they are too smart to hate...
before their life is too late

and watermellown wine taste so fine
it's one thing that can blow your...
it will blow your mine"


but whiskey
is so risky
makes you friskey
whiskey makes you misty

thanks to you Mr. Tom T. Hall
for old dogs & children
watermellon wine
the fruit of the vine

thanks to you
for helpin' me pay my due
to "old dogs and childrdn"
thanks for the whiskey
rum & gin
and a chance to begin agin

thanks for takin' my change
in exchange
from off the table
thanks for helpin' me get stable

"old dogs & children...
a chance to begin agin..."

without the whiskey nor the wine
thanks tom t.
for helpin' me to see
the man i should be

thanks for old dogs
children
whiskey & women

"old dogs & children
watermellon wine"

man that is a great line

i hope we can all find

old dog's & children
and that fine line
between love & hate

blended whiskey
and an old man
showin' life is riskey
and we each take a stand

old bars
old lines
new stars
new rhymes

each have their own times

thank you for san antonio
that night
those rhymes

thanks for the insight

about what makes life kind...
"old dogs & children...watermellon wine"

blenddd whiskey and you

that be true s

but so do the blues

guesss tom, that'll have to do





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 Reviews of "old dogs & children..."
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
I think Rufuz would like "watermelon wine", hell he will eat anything else...LOL! We both appreciate the mention herein, as for me I feel I do really have a friend and as for Rufuz he thinks, "when am I gonna get food from this guy Unclc Steve...?" He doesn't understand how far away you are, but someday, yes someday...Peace always, Ed & Rufuz (woof)

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
I love that song too Steve,I have abrother who sings 'old dogs and children and watermelon wine'its an awesome sone isn't it?
And hey old mate,you wrote an awesome poem right around it so perfectly,it was really great.Excellent work!
I hope all is well in your corner of the globe.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
Kay.


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