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just a suggestion...
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
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i was angry
justified
mystyfied
so i called a friend
on ad
she said to me
"write"
and so i do
words for you
no poetry
no rhyme
just gettin' rid of the anger
the pain
the bein' insane

i see the full moon
on a December night
i remeber the snow
which we never know

i see the sunshine
in the day
i see clouds
in the sky

i remember rain
when it falls
i've known pain
when it calls

music i've heard
poems i've written
songs with a word
rhymes that were hidden

green grass
old trees
old dogs
cats
squirells
rats
blue jeans
shorts
t-shirts
8-tracks
lp's
cassettess
bar rooms
bar stools
empty bottles
empty glasses
bi-focals
the local yocals
fast cars
pickup trucks
old f**Ks
or new
pc's
want to be's
used to be's
wanna' be's
shoulda' been
back when
and then
again
begin
once more
what's in store
what's on the shelf
for mySElf
younger women
who get older
words i said before
feelin' i felt
cards i was dealt
hold 'em or fold 'em
she had red hair
she has blue eyes
stars
late at night
i write

a full moon

the wind blows
the moon shines
the cat howels
the dog does his dog thing

lovers love

drinkers drink

druggers drug

writters write

poets
poet
poetry

ain't that insane

no ?".,!#.%%^&&*((())))__).

no music
in a poems song

an empty cup
full of words

a 2 z

just gettin' rid of anger
leavin life behind
find what you find
when you read me

just a suggestion...

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 Reviews of "just a suggestion..."
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
OutStanDing Out pOuring!!!
you do do what you do sooooo weLL

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
an outpouring of writers' angst in your words, S. If I should ever turn my Writing Junkie site, writingjunkie.net, into a circle of more than one, you're an automatic member. :-)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
My goodness what a great rant. Now that this is out have a good belch and Happy New Year.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
This is great! It has a sincerity about it and it expresses a trail of thoughts and feelings that many of us can relate to. The words seem like a spontaneous and flowing release of steam and energy escaping from a pressure valve. Clap! Clap! Clap!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
"words i said before
feelin' i felt"

So many times we have all done this, the whole poem is "just a GOOD suggestion!" Relax, take a deep breath and chill, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Ah Steve, I hear you loud and clear, this one touches so deeply tonight,

Reindeer


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