i am abupt?!. (poem) by Steve Patterson on AuthorsDen

i am abupt?!.
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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i am abuprt don't interrupt short & concise precise
i abbreviate to punctuate a puntuality a reality so see i be who i be i like to write poetry concisely precisely precisely because i have no cause except love and poetry thats just me see lower case just in case is better than a capital letter just in case i forget or forgot to shift i tend to drift when i write right you got an insigt show me the light spell hell who can tell not me see what we see oh well we be what be yeah, both me & you those words be true they may make you blue oh so sad too bad or glad mad by the way... an fyi i do not type ain't got that hype typin' ain't me i can't see bi-focals local vocals to me... senetences are pentances for forgottin' feelin's 1 way a dealings write more say less say more pay less paragraphs are just graphs of the above given a sentance a shove a perod ... . (period) did you not know did i not show when my words came to an end the end or did around some curve did they bend a question mark... what a lark a dog who can't bark did my thoughts not say i did not understand were they that bland just word play out to the dark did i have no nerve did my words swerve were they that unheard qqqqOta-Tations... masterBations one nations under that notion what notions we write right day or night we right right midnight who owns what it's been said before what i said that i said this hey once i took a piss right there i own it hey i thought that too i f**kd her did you QuoTa$$$ions have ruined nations a dash (-) underline a whine or a wine chato-wine a beer-on-the-rocks scotch straigt up whatup or down by then youre drunk lost your socks scratch your crotch blown your socks and still feel fine you are a man about town on your way down a pair-a-rented-these ' what are these jeezzze green cheese an apostrofree nutin' is free it be what it be can't you see these do what they do they have no clue do you colons & semis hemis with expression a suggestion why brings tears to my eyes i cry : because because ; it was what it was stars & bars backslash backlash what far's ok OK? OK!!! ... I promise i will SPELL korrectly. I WILL CAPITILAZE. I wILL pUNCTUALIZE i now REALalalalaize see i SEEE my Poetry ain't "Grammatcally CORRECT!!!" correct? or was that incorect hey hect i'm just a country boy hell i can't spell i don't know an a from a b i just be me thats what i write about sumtimes yu know it's kinda fund writin you can find out a bunch a things you never thought life could brings untilll you got the freedom to say time & space erase short & sweet abrupt GOD don't interupt supplemnt now is that a verb or adverb i heard ..... GOD SIAD...!!! "I AM ABUPT. NOW SHUT UP. ANY QUESTIONS?" ... well... yeah you didn't rhyme so good, GOD "No Shit...you are here" next ???

Reviewed by Tina Clark

Reviewed on December 29, 2005

Well done! covered alot in all this! LOL

Hugs
Tina

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Hmmmmm...well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 28, 2005

Maybe so, but you are also funny. You can slice and dice your words any way you want. It is still going to come out a piece of art.

~ Sara

P.S. - Hi Lady Peg. I remember when you had to post a few of
Steve's poems a couple of years ago after he spilled coke or rum & coke on his keyboard. LOL...I remember you commented on how he spelled out the words the way he wanted them to appear and not the way you wanted to write them. Yep. Like a surgeon, he slices with precision.

Reviewed by P B (Reader)

Yes you are very much so I remember trying to type a poem for you once lol.

Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)

Hey ~ save some of that celebrating for New Year's Eve already!