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gimme' a break
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
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gimme' a break
if i take a re-take
it ain't by mistake
i just know heartache

when i go back "where'
it don't mean i'm livin' "there"
it don't mean i still care
hell, that wouldn't be fair

what i mean is, for me
heartache is just what i see
that's just how it be
it's just poetry

so for pete's sake, gimme' a break
when i take a re-take
it ain't no mistake
i just know heartache
 

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 Reviews of "gimme' a break"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
You got it...go for it!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
Seems you know it better than most...e & R

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
I hear ya! retake all you want;-)

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
yes, i believe you do steve, certainly you know life and i've read about it often in your poetry. it is good to see you so well

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
LOL!!! Alright already!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 4, 2006
A great take on the misunderstood poet.

Ron


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