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SUICIDE
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suicide.
nice place to hide.

guess it's
the "ultimate Goodbye".

no more feelin'.
not like it's Felt.

no more dealin'
with what's been Dealt.

just dyin'.

goin' away.

outta' here.

somewhere.

into the unknown.

just tryin'
ta' get away.

sowin' seeds
ain't been sown.

least this way
ya' know when it's done.

least now i know
the song's been sung.

suicide.
slow slide.

time to live.
time to die.

time to say
"good-bye".
"goodbye".

suicide.




OK, OK----not doin it....
just felt the feeling...morn'n once.

it's cool i'm still here. for now.
anyhow.

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 Reviews of "SUICIDE"
Reviewed by Cheryl Shoemaker
Reviewed on June 15, 2002
cannot find the words...horrified, I am...
I can only agree with Michelle, and restate..kick, scream, punch--but fight like hell !!! and YES...keep your passion ALIVE !!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 14, 2002
keep your passion alive!

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
some deep thinking here steve, enjoyed the word play, having experienced the suicide death of my oldest brother, and having had similar thoughts cross my own mind, i believe that suicide is possible when 'today' is so dark that tomorrow becomes impossible to even contemplate.

btw, thanks for your note on my message board, i know i've been a little scarce, but please don't take it personally... i still read and enjoy your work. keep it alive :)

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2002
Michelle said it best.. Suicide is a way to ensure your loved ones will forever remember you... with pain, guilt, anger, confusion... and it never goes away. Those questions.. What if? Should I have done this? Should I have done that? Questions your loved ones would take to the grave with them...I have an article posted here titled: Suicide is not an option.. I still believe that.
Love and Light
dreamweaver

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 10, 2002
I agree with jay, about NOT going quietly. fight it, make a fuss, kick scream. Do what you have to but dont do it alone

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on June 10, 2002
Suicide isn't a very good answer, to any problem, still I am sure we all have considered it some kind of an answer at times. great write into that dark side that sometimes rears its ugly head. Love and hopefully life, Sandi

Reviewed by Michelle Carroll (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2002
It's sad, but really suicide is about ultimately hurting the ones you leave behind.


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