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everyday (an honest write)
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an honest write,
no attempt to ryhme.
only expsose my soul.

i have loved and given my love
beyond what i could hold.

everyday
i wake up & i love you.
everyday
i wake up without you.

everyday
i cry for you.

everyday
i am without you.

everyday
i wake up alone.

everyday
i make my self go on.
without you.

everyday.
seems like yesterday.
when i wasn't without you.
when i wasn't alone.

everyday.
yesterday.
tomorrorrow.

everyday.
why is today
everyday?

why isn't
today tomorrow?


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Reviewed by Silvia (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2002
WOW!Lots of emotions in this...beautiful!
I especially loved the last 2 stanzas.

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
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Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
Your friends in Tx salute you.

Alan & Janet

Reviewed on July 20, 2002
Very powerful emotional write Steve. Your last two stanzas:

"everyday.
why is today
everyday?

why isn't
today tomorrow?"

These are the greatest in displaying your feelings - the feelings of not wanting to face another day like yesterday.

Okay, just think of it this way:


Everyday is a brand new day
Everyday I live a grand new way
Never a moment of grieves for yesterday

Tomorrow could be just another day
just another day of today and yesterday

Yesterday.....Today
Yesterday.....Today

Gone are the days of yesterday
Today's a brand new me and a brand new day.

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
very strong..good luck

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
This is a great write... Just wish it wasn't a true to life one.

Namaste'
dreamweaver

Reviewed by a- maryllis
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
This is beautiful Steve... the best writes come when we, as writers, are honest...

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 20, 2002
Very heartfelt Steve...alot of longing and emotion. Good write!!!


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