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i love Livin' - it's Life i hate
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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i love Livin'
it's Life i hate.
we find out too late
that time won't wait.

all the tomorrows
just become yesterdays.
all the todays
just fade aways.
each in their own ways.

stop & smell the roses
but hold your know-is
'cause Life poses
it's shares of cares
and worries & sorrys.
our wishes & hopes,
our dreams & schemes
don't mean a things
ta' Life 'till Life's all done.
with our livin',
with our givin'
all we got
when the last hands been played,
the last cards been layed,
and you lose the pot,
all ya' got
is what ya' got.

that's Life
but that ain't Livin'.
it's just given
Life away.
wouldn't ya' say?

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 Reviews of "i love Livin' - it's Life i hate"
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
I like this lots
Chrissie

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
this is really could be a great song. But as a poem it is excellent I can so relate to what this poem says nice job

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2003
Very good

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on February 4, 2003
dude i know this song
josie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2003
I agree with Janet and Alan! You'd do great! Enjoyed this Steve Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2003
You should have been a song writer, a country song writer. You'd make a great one.

Love, Janet & Alan xoxoxo


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