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awhhhhh
by Steve Patterson → (All Poetry by Steve Patterson)
  
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awhhh
if i could
i would
write
the perfect words
have the rythmn
i'd have the rhyme
if it was
my perfect time

but
perfect
guess
that ain't me
what ya' see
is what ya' get's
& yet's
i keep
written
i keep fightin'
waitin' for the ligtnin'
ta' strike
ta' hit me twice
guess that'd
be nice
to be hit twice
or thrice
or 4 times
love in 3/4 time


awwwwww
i do ramble
i gamble
i scramble
but what i say
is what i mean
Life is lean
Life is mean

know what i mean?

if you don't then
you won't

do i care
would i share?

naw!!!!!

if you can't figer' it out

not my due'd

ust ta'write for you
now that i don't do

it might
be about this
or about that
i just write


if ya;' wanna' learn
how to write'


then give it all
you might

say what ya' say
pay for that day
pay if you may
when then the ain'ts comes

let it come
let it go

but you
as a poet
just write
right or wrong
poet

sing your song




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 Reviews of "awhhhhh"
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2003
lol at Mr. Hull...

I enjoyed this Steve.. though I got lost a few times in the beat.. course I'm tired.. doesn't count lol

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
happy, smiling.
dug

Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
And to each his own, song that is.
Enjoyed this Steve.
Love and tranqility,
Amy Marie (DOR)

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
Good Job, Steve!!


tony

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
I could feel the beat, the rythmn of your words bopping along here. I never noticed that before. I guess it was always there, that tune.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Hey this one is excellent love the last stanza.
peggy

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Read like a rap, to me.


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