awhhh
if i could
i would
write
the perfect words
have the rythmn
i'd have the rhyme
if it was
my perfect time
but
perfect
guess
that ain't me
what ya' see
is what ya' get's
& yet's
i keep
written
i keep fightin'
waitin' for the ligtnin'
ta' strike
ta' hit me twice
guess that'd
be nice
to be hit twice
or thrice
or 4 times
love in 3/4 time
awwwwww
i do ramble
i gamble
i scramble
but what i say
is what i mean
Life is lean
Life is mean
know what i mean?
if you don't then
you won't
do i care
would i share?
naw!!!!!
if you can't figer' it out
not my due'd
ust ta'write for you
now that i don't do
it might
be about this
or about that
i just write
if ya;' wanna' learn
how to write'
then give it all
you might
say what ya' say
pay for that day
pay if you may
when then the ain'ts comes
let it come
let it go
but you
as a poet
just write
right or wrong
poet
sing your song
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Reviews of "awhhhhh"
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 17, 2003
lol at Mr. Hull...
I enjoyed this Steve.. though I got lost a few times in the beat.. course I'm tired.. doesn't count lol
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
happy, smiling.
dug
Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
And to each his own, song that is.
Enjoyed this Steve.
Love and tranqility,
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I enjoyed this Steve.. though I got lost a few times in the beat.. course I'm tired.. doesn't count lol
dug
Enjoyed this Steve.
Love and tranqility,
Amy Marie (DOR)
tony
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