She knelt beneath willow’s tears,
that dampened her silken blouse,
trembling fingers, unfastened buttons,
a breeze brushed, against naked breasts,
whispering forget-me-nots in her ear,
red lips pressed against the wind,
goose bumps danced on pale skin,
the sun was heated, in jealous rage,
burning desire, to be her warmth,
though, she was true to her heart’s content,
that blew her away…..into a whirlwind of love
A BEAUTIFUL, PURE AND SWEET ODE...TO THE WONDER AND MAGNIFICENSE...OF LOVE. WELL DONE, CHRISTINE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Christine, the articulate blend of passion with tender stimulation of the senses is done marvelously. Your words caressed my imagination like a gentle kiss. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Oh My, dear lady, you have set the den afire!!! Makes me want to run naked on the beach.
Such a wonderfully written piece, you have outdone yourself with this one!!!
Wow Christine, you blew me away. I was just sitting here thinking about you - that you haven't posted anything in a while - and low and behold
- a hurricane category 5.
I reiterate my comments from the past...you are a fantastic poet and wordsmith and when you write we listen. I felt each line and each word of this composition and it not only stirred my passion but warmed my heart. I have always said that the mark of a great poet is the ability to touch another's emotions with their words....you have touched all of mine with this epic. Truly beautiful...
hugs
fee
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excellent write Christine
Love & Peace
William
Regis
Love,
Eileen
Always,
Deborah
Splendid writing, Christine.
John
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Such a wonderfully written piece, you have outdone yourself with this one!!!
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
- a hurricane category 5.
Cheers,
Dan
hugs
fee
love & passion passion passion
the depth of each line is captivating
Love's Embrace
Vickie
Blessings,
Christine
Peace,
Dayvid
Blessings,
Anna