Out of Mind (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Magnificant! Very visual and moving.

Reviewed on November 27, 2010

This is truly most engaging of senses and mind, Christine. You got all of my attention. So well-expressed. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on November 15, 2010

Why did she have to travel so far to feed her mind and senses? I was left with this question... My imagination is at work!

Axilea

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on November 10, 2010

HOW UTTERLY SAD...FOR THE BOTH OF THEM. WHAT A WORK OF ART YOU HAVE LAID ON THIS DARK CANVASS THAT WHISPERS SO TENDERLY, YET...SCREECHES WITH A BLATANT MEANING. THIS IS A KEEPER. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR GIFT WITH THIS MOST IMPRESSIVE ARTISTICAL WORK...YOU ARE SO GOOD CHRISTINE. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on November 9, 2010

Christine, you definitely know how to bring the best out of a romantic poem. A+ Love your closing line!

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on November 8, 2010

W o w and W o w again!!

Scrumptious also comes to mind.

Sssssssizzzzzzzlin' !! :)

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 8, 2010

this is exotic and erotic and hypnotic Christine!
Luscious Motions Drumming Desirously

Love's Buoyant Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

Beautifully composed and presented from the heart but with such tenderness that it captures the heart of this reader as well. You created a wonderful feeling in this one Chrissie...loved it.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

An exceptional moment of otherness, Christine, and sometimes we don't know where we go but does it really matter? I think not; it's the going that's everything.
The heart as shawl is truly beautiful.

John

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

Exquisitely erotic and mysterious Christine. "pushing against the pull of the moon, hips banging a drum of steel, tummy tucked along for the ride". And what a ride you have described. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

Mystical beauty in this sensual poem Christine!

Carole~

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

Beautifully erotic Christine!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

WOW!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

beautiful and filled with emotion

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

Magical, beautiful and sensuous, Christine!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on November 7, 2010

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 6, 2010

draped over her shoulders no doubt ... a heart can keep one warm indeed ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 6, 2010

I love this, you are so creative and sensual. Nicely done, Christine!
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on November 6, 2010

Dear Christine, I am happy that in the conclusion you wrote: "her mind returned from shore, reuniting with her body and soul". The mind is our stongest ennemy we should always control our mind. Love Emile

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on November 6, 2010

dreamy wandering, fun to read ~ Morgan

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on November 6, 2010

There's a wonderful dreamy feel to this piece. Great writing.
Sheila

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 6, 2010

Sweet write, Christine. Written as an Angel would write it.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on November 6, 2010

This was a great writing.

Namaste
Tony