Dawn, Poetry at its finest. The last two lines brought it all home. Excellence. Lisa
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
MASTERFUL work, Dawn! I love this form of poetry...HERE the form is more IMPORTANT than STRUCTURE...and I love how you progress in each line...BRILLIANT poem, Poet!
This is a perfect poetic dance of such intensity and depth, Dawn. The balance and the rhythm are superb and the seed of truth and pearls of wisdom you "crack open" are most beautiful. You take us into the central crux and out again wonderfully. This is a real gem of a write - am keeping! Thank you. Kate xx
Major League ballplayer Justin Moore is kidnapped from his own ballpark and transported to a foreign land. It might take high-level international negotiations to free him. Or maybe he will take matters into his own hands.
The gifted and fascinating Urban Poet, Asa D Seeley, once again speaks. He introduces a New Genre of Poetry...Reality Confrontation. Juxtaposed with Essay and staying true to his unique style, Asa brings a breath of...fresh air...to the world of poet
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
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