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Don’t Think You Can Save Him
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Machete
carving knife
Samurai sword

familiar
weapons of
abusive lord

whose black heart
and iron fist
crush innocence

by slicing
away at
hope, confidence.


Let not such
rage, grown full
from inner ache,

deceive you;
nor touch, tears,
for love mistake.

The one who
would subdue,
overpower,

must be dealt
a blow and
needs to cower.


First things first:
get out – run;
don’t hesitate.

Don’t think you
can save him,
say it’s too late.

You cannot
wait until
abuse abates.

Go. Go now;
Safe shelter,
comfort awaits.


You love him –
if so, you’ll
give him this gift.

If setting
this limit
creates a rift,

so be it.
You – your life
matter far more

than “love” that
coexists
with blood and gore. 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Don’t Think You Can Save Him"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 9, 2004
Wonderful message!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2004
This is powerful!

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on November 9, 2004
phew, sounds like a dangerman that must be kept at arm's length, in fact I'd put a state or two between this samurai and the woman he's
lording it over. kenny

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 9, 2004
I'm not even in an abusive relationship and I felt the need to run. Your message and imagery within is an explosive scene.
Very well written Dawn.

Lisa

Reviewed on November 8, 2004
Well done. This is a marvelous piece.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 8, 2004
i feel a deep inner conviction and proclivity for the simple truth in the very powerful poem ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2004
Great message!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on November 8, 2004
We must continue to encourage them to leave while they are still physically able and while they still have some strength. Thank you for speaking out, Dawn. Thank you.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 8, 2004
This is differnt for you Dawn! .Reading it felt like short staccato burst from a machine gun. Very effective, powerful write!


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