Rush hour commute: a heavy price to pay… my debt to society for some impropriety? But I see I’ve company along the way.
My Accord inches forward. The car lives up to its name, insulates me from slow-motion insanity unfolding outside its sanctuary, a temple for contemplative prayer where I plead my caseto nobody in particular.
The other cars move as one, a sea of lemmings following the flow of traffic, headed for who cares where. Every morning: the same tired procession, a ritualized nightmare. Is it any wonder it’s come to this?
I check the speedometer, if only to see if it can withstand torture of this tortoise pace. A horse-drawn carriage carrying a dead princess would move faster. Dead. Princess. I used to want to be both. Thankfully, my wishes are seldom granted.
The drone of my thoughts goes on. I scan the horizon for some diversion. Not three feet from the driver’s seat window, bovine beauties peer through evenly-spaced, round holes in the metal carrier.
This one looks like Bessie, the milk cow. Her glassy-eyed innocence says these cows know nothing of their true destination. They’re headed for the end of the line, chopped meat.
My stomach churns at the awful realization: my own lust for red meat may play some part in Bessie’s fated end. If I don’t look away – and soon! – I’m bound to think of Bessie next time I order up my favorite steak fajitas or grab a burger to go.
Inside a Mercedes M Class, a Southern Belle puts on her eyeliner, then purses her lips and winks a stamp of self-approval in the rear-view mirror. She catches me observing her private ritual, apparently flattered by the intrusion;
She waves as if we were second cousins. Twice removed from picture perfect world of pretense, I fix my eyes on the goal of avoiding the accident ahead.
I swerve and survive, destined to drive on through dreary day. I like to think I’m lucky, special, chosen one.
But I know we’re more alike than different – Bessie, the Belle and me. We’re on the slow road, headed for the slaughterhouse, never really knowing when our time will come.
I wrote of the vast South Texas filled with cars and road kill. I do not envy you--can't stand slow traffic. Fortunately, for over twenty years I've driven at breakneck speed over twenty miles on one of the most heavily-traveled freeways to work in mid Houston.
GAD the imagery you use--the reader is caught up in your words and cannot get away--a most profound, thought provoking piece you've penned. well done! the third stanza is absolutely brilliant--and that ending--WOW!
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Love those bovines and makeup driving artists.
Ron
Love Tinka
Carole
A tortoise could move faster on our congested highways...
Peter
Poetic perfection was quilled with every stroke of your pen - exceptional write ... top drawer all the way!! Would make a great song!!
Best wishes,
Robert
You have a Picasso word painting here! ;-) Brava!
GAD the imagery you use--the reader is caught up in your words and cannot get away--a most profound, thought provoking piece you've penned. well done! the third stanza is absolutely brilliant--and that ending--WOW!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)