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Shrink-Wrapped
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this one says
she suffers from
narcissistic notions,
he's afraid he has no potions
to remedy her pain
from being less
than only.

the other
disagrees, speaks
of imminent danger;
evil, addiction, she tells her
draws itself unto you...
surrender now,
Dorothy.

the doctor
prescribes more pills,
dismissing such nonsense
in favor of diagnosis:
biochemical flaw,
nothing more and
nothing less.

the one she
calls her wizard
pulls the magic curtain,
tells her in terms more than certain
that she has the power
to click her heels,
get back home.

the "little
lepracaun" tries
costly talk therapy,
says there's nothing wrong,
they're playing tricks, can't you see?
wishing they were
more like you.

on the ward
they tell her
dysfunctional systems
are at the root of her problems,
she's been planted where she
cannot grow and
must let go.

the mirror
reflects stark truth,
the hurt inside shows through.
it doesn't really matter who
says what is wrong; she's been
shrink-wrapped one too
many times. 

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 Reviews of "Shrink-Wrapped"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
A quite chilling look and feel.

Ron

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
the perfect title
scary imagery here
can smell the stale~ness in the air
am the suppose to be white walls

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
Very deep insightful write.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
I agree with the others, Dawn. Excellent creativity, etc. The shrink-wrap metaphor is a gold nugget.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Outstanding, excellent write, Dawn.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
this is a roller coaster of emotions and the imagery is great

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Oh, this is so creative! Wonderful. I am still being "shrink-wrapped" (love that term) but I'm finally getting better.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Oh, this reads so perfectly. It moves right through the moods, a joy ride of the mind. Needless to say, the ending really packed a punch and ended this mind-journey at a shreaking halt. Thanks for the ride!
:)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Well penned Dawn!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
That last stanza really brings all the feelings to a boil. This is a great get-in-your-head kind of write.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
introspective write..

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Well done, interesting poem Dawn.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
So that is what happened to my brain? Now I know and as the others said this is well done.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Okies, so it's about bi-polar...

Blimey reads like you've captured your subject well..

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
4th stanza strikes a chord here Dawn...many feelings jump from this, most that I am sure you know. I really enjoyed this daring piece...so well done.

Allen

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
You captured the theme well. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Powerful write on the medical merry-go-round that bi-polar
treatment can be...fantastic poem Dawn!
eileen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
it is up to us to be both actor and audience,
patient and analyst
it is up to us to perform well on stage
and transcentd the external settings ...

exellent psychological poem ...


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