hey AD friends! i've been hibernating for awhile, but here comes the sun. thought i'd peek in. hope to get back to reading soon. haven't forgotten you. take care, Dawn
In the End, We Begin
In my last breath a symphony will swell and all the world shall know I loved you well and long as the years without you, true as the stillness in winter’s starry sky.
Though I speak it not, know I’ve held these things, treasure that you are, deep within, where all thought is but a pulse quickening, where speech and sound dissolve into the hum of an oceanic sky.
My soul sings and believes still in heaven’s distant home rising beneath the missing you inside of me. We will rest one day in the other’s arms, fly beyond blue field of separation.
Then with flaming sword of purest hope we shall pierce this emptiness through. And you will see me for who I am, and we will stomp our feet in joy and laugh and never cry again.
Truly winter into spring here, Dawn, and a triumphal vernal shout of celebration! I have missed you but hope that your "hibernation" finds you rejuvenated and re-energised... certainly seems so! A "youth springs eternal" write which speaks of an inner confidence. I like the strength of the form and structure that underpins this. "Strong" diction, too. TY Kate xx
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Welcome back. :) A wonderful shout of celebration, indeed, as Kate Burnside has said...stay strong! A lovely, inspiring write, thank you--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reindeer
This is beautiful. I loved that last
stanza, of course it's all good. ;)
Dale
Enjoyed the read!!
Love Tinka
You gotta laugh. Even cry with laughter.
Love the positve hope this shows..
That's what your return does.
Beautiful Dawn.
John
enjoyed your write
William ....Peace
This poem is outstanding!The last stanza is a
beautiful treat that makes the heart happy!
etw